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my words ring true
all the way from my heart
my fears and pain
these foolish mistakes
on paper for you to see
horrid as they may seem
this tainted soul of mine
drawn with metaphors
told in time
maybe if someone hears
they may see my errors
learn from them
vowing never to follow this path
or maybe find understanding
and feel better about their plight
no longer would i think
this life to be in vain
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My Mission

Contributed by karoody on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 03:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

if for one moment
my words ring true
all the way from my heart
my fears and pain
these foolish mistakes
on paper for you to see
horrid as they may seem
this tainted soul of mine
drawn with metaphors
told in time
maybe if someone hears
they may see my errors
learn from them
vowing never to follow this path
or maybe find understanding
and feel better about their plight
no longer would i think
this life to be in vain

Copyright © karoody ... [ 2003-04-15 15:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Mission (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 03:55:49 PM AEST
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Wow..how could you think like this?? You're so special grrl...life is never in vain....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: My Mission (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 04:10:50 PM AEST
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words spoken in a beautiful poem only a true poetess could write, much love and hugs always nessa

Re: My Mission (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 04:16:05 PM AEST
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words well written...you a special and very talented...believe in yourself
Sharon

Re: My Mission (User Rating: 1 )
by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 04:34:45 PM AEST
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wow.. good stuff.

Re: My Mission (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 12:41:17 AM AEST
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I say that your soul is not tainted. just it is tinted with various types of human emotions... which are very common.. be confident your mission will be fullfilled. venkat

Re: My Mission (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 05:18:12 PM AEST
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I think that we all feel like this time to time.Thank you kara for sharing such a deep and wonderful poem
kat

Re: My Mission (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 01:22:40 PM AEST
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very poetic I enjoyed reading this lots of truth my mind draws a blank...

Your friend,
Joel

Re: My Mission (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 02:41:51 PM AEST
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kara, this is amazing, just beautiful...you captured how everyone feels about their "foolish mistakes"...mission completed!

Lindsey

Re: My Mission (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 03:13:12 PM AEST
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very beautifully written kara... i believe as others do that you are not tainted but filled with empty spaces that are bein filled...everyone is born with a clean slate and its justa matter of time before they fill it up... we may not possess an eraser for our slates but we can fill the slate with better brighter caligraphy to show right from wrong
-Sid

Re: My Mission (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 09:49:56 PM AEST
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There is benovelence in here
that is where the poet, the poem and the reader
cann have cause for celebration.

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