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[sid] => 160272
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Surface/Headlights
[time] => 2010-05-31 15:01:31
[hometext] => One of the first poems I wrote and probably my favourite, I would love some impartial, unbiased feedback. It's pretty basic and I hope you enjoy it.
[bodytext] => The Stare that I wear, has left you deluded. Theres more behind there, than you had concluded. You'l see no dilligence, Just fatuity, see no intelligence, I choose vacuity. Most heads are fallow, look inside they are blank. People are shallow, and their water turns rank. My emotions aren't loud, i have no control, If you are on my cloud, You will hear my soul. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 140 [topic] => 48 [informant] => drewba [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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