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Array ( [sid] => 160065 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => YOUR LAST GOODBYE [time] => 2010-05-23 00:56:48 [hometext] => It is sometimes difficult to accept when someone you love walks away. [bodytext] => Many years ago
Everything seemed just fine
Those were our happiest days
But now they've been scarred by time
The wound's so deep, it cuts through my soul
And I still don't know why?
That you had to say your last goodbye

You meant the world to me
Someone I could depend
But now that you're gone for good
All I can do is pretend
My heart has sunk, I'm a broken man
No matter how many tears I cry
I still hear you say your last goodbye

If you told me where it started to go wrong
I could have tried to sort it out
But even if I did everything that I could
I would still have my doubts

I can't forget the past
There's a voice that won't let me go
I've tried my best to move on
But it's harder than you could know
Memories haunt me, your ghost I still see
Your words will stay 'til I die
I remember when you said your last goodbye...
I will never forget your last goodbye



AUTHORS PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 22 [informant] => chrisdavid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
YOUR LAST GOODBYE

Contributed by chrisdavid on Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 12:56:48 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Many years ago
Everything seemed just fine
Those were our happiest days
But now they've been scarred by time
The wound's so deep, it cuts through my soul
And I still don't know why?
That you had to say your last goodbye

You meant the world to me
Someone I could depend
But now that you're gone for good
All I can do is pretend
My heart has sunk, I'm a broken man
No matter how many tears I cry
I still hear you say your last goodbye

If you told me where it started to go wrong
I could have tried to sort it out
But even if I did everything that I could
I would still have my doubts

I can't forget the past
There's a voice that won't let me go
I've tried my best to move on
But it's harder than you could know
Memories haunt me, your ghost I still see
Your words will stay 'til I die
I remember when you said your last goodbye...
I will never forget your last goodbye



AUTHORS PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.



Copyright © chrisdavid ... [ 2010-05-23 00:56:48]
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Re: YOUR LAST GOODBYE (User Rating: 1 )
by rambo56 on Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 04:22:32 AM AEST
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sad but good nice write


Re: YOUR LAST GOODBYE (User Rating: 1 )
by Egor on Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 10:36:49 AM AEST
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that was very beautiful. also painful to read because it brings up my memories. either way, nicely done!




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