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I wish I could
but I can’t.
I’m still drinking.
Seems to me
each choice I make
is always the wrong one
It’s not help I need
nor wish to succeed
it’s just I don’t want to
change right now.
What would I do
with a brand new me?
Just wear it out
and work it down.
’Til I revert to type.
I know it’s not for life,
It’s just a piece of me
that I can’t isolate.
It’s just that part of me
that keeps on saying
“One more, one more”.
One more.
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One More

Contributed by Debris on Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 04:51:26 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

I wish I could
but I can’t.
I’m still drinking.
Seems to me
each choice I make
is always the wrong one
It’s not help I need
nor wish to succeed
it’s just I don’t want to
change right now.
What would I do
with a brand new me?
Just wear it out
and work it down.
’Til I revert to type.
I know it’s not for life,
It’s just a piece of me
that I can’t isolate.
It’s just that part of me
that keeps on saying
“One more, one more”.
One more.

Copyright Â© Debris ... [ 2010-05-22 04:51:26]
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Re: One More (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 05:08:28 AM AEST
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It's just I don't want to change right now, the pivotal line and the pivotal point of addiction, well written

Re: One More (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Saturday, 22nd May 2010 @ 11:10:44 AM AEST
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this is a well constructed piece of writing, giving the reader a deep down inside look at addiction. great stuff.

Re: One More (User Rating: 1 )
by SunshineySam on Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 08:21:34 PM AEST
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Oh my gosh yes! ah when i drank, it was always "one more, one more." I always needed more. Even when i did drugs it was always one more one more. I'm so happy to be sober. Well written.

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