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Array ( [sid] => 159979 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love? [time] => 2010-05-19 17:31:21 [hometext] => A poem about my feelings [bodytext] => i just keep staring cant look away
she is a vision of beauty in every single way
if eyes are the window to the soul
then ive seen heaven
if a smile goes a long way
then im in the artic
This girl drives me crazy theres not much to say
i think i love her in every kind way
my eyes catch her beauty from across a crowed room
that beauty like a flower just about to bloom
there is one single problem
that seems to come to mind
she dosnt know i exsist
i doubht im even her kind
i dream about her day and night
just looking at me
the kinda way i look at her
hoping she will set me free
i feel ashamed of who i am
whenever she is near
i feel kinda werid as if im not even there
insted im floating up high above
judging myself and wondering....
am i in love
i think about the days she smiles and talks to me
and i laugh and smile so full of glee
im still too young to know if love is what im feeling
or maybe its my hormones looking for sexually healing




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Love?

Contributed by doyler94 on Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 05:31:21 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



i just keep staring cant look away
she is a vision of beauty in every single way
if eyes are the window to the soul
then ive seen heaven
if a smile goes a long way
then im in the artic
This girl drives me crazy theres not much to say
i think i love her in every kind way
my eyes catch her beauty from across a crowed room
that beauty like a flower just about to bloom
there is one single problem
that seems to come to mind
she dosnt know i exsist
i doubht im even her kind
i dream about her day and night
just looking at me
the kinda way i look at her
hoping she will set me free
i feel ashamed of who i am
whenever she is near
i feel kinda werid as if im not even there
insted im floating up high above
judging myself and wondering....
am i in love
i think about the days she smiles and talks to me
and i laugh and smile so full of glee
im still too young to know if love is what im feeling
or maybe its my hormones looking for sexually healing




doyler94, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.

Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.




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Re: Love? (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 11:57:37 PM AEST
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I liked this one. You sum up what you feel pretty well. Good write.




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