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burning very brighty burning very slow
while staring at the candle i went in to a daze
and saw two angels dancing in the middle of the haze
they were very peaceful dancing in the cloud
as i sat watched i felt so very proud.
the angels they were happy so very bright and gay
and as the candle lost its light the angels flew away
i wont forget the candle and the angels that i saw
oneday i will return again and watch them dance once more

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dancing angels

Contributed by rambo56 on Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 04:45:23 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

i walked in to a church and watched a candle glow
burning very brighty burning very slow
while staring at the candle i went in to a daze
and saw two angels dancing in the middle of the haze
they were very peaceful dancing in the cloud
as i sat watched i felt so very proud.
the angels they were happy so very bright and gay
and as the candle lost its light the angels flew away
i wont forget the candle and the angels that i saw
oneday i will return again and watch them dance once more

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Re: dancing angels (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 05:49:28 PM AEST
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Beautiful and very delightful.
smiles, blessings,
emy

Re: dancing angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Nevilleconnie on Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 06:05:18 PM AEST
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Very beautiful poem. I love the way you write. Fantastic job. I could almost see the angels dancing myself, that's how good your descriptions were.

Re: dancing angels (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 01:26:12 AM AEST
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Great imgery,there is something very mystical about candle flame and you have added the spiritual element,together with the simplistic imagery creates an escape to another world well written

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