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Array ( [sid] => 159487 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => We're moving on [time] => 2010-05-03 13:38:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I thought my life was over
Still hardly convinced it’s not

And what it all comes down to
Is you’re about all I’ve got

You’ve got me holding on
You’ve got me clinging close

You’ve got me feeling strong
When I’m barely on my toes

I was at a deadlock
I very nearly still am

But you have got me round the clock
Feeling, maybe I can

Maybe I can do this
Maybe it’s not too late

Maybe I’ll get through this
Maybe I’ll just stay

Stay and see what happens
And try to enjoy the ride

But, baby, just keep on guiding
Cause I’m too drunk to drive
And we’re moving on.

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We're moving on

Contributed by allymp on Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 01:38:48 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

I thought my life was over
Still hardly convinced it’s not

And what it all comes down to
Is you’re about all I’ve got

You’ve got me holding on
You’ve got me clinging close

You’ve got me feeling strong
When I’m barely on my toes

I was at a deadlock
I very nearly still am

But you have got me round the clock
Feeling, maybe I can

Maybe I can do this
Maybe it’s not too late

Maybe I’ll get through this
Maybe I’ll just stay

Stay and see what happens
And try to enjoy the ride

But, baby, just keep on guiding
Cause I’m too drunk to drive
And we’re moving on.

Copyright Â© allymp ... [ 2010-05-03 13:38:48]
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Re: We're moving on (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 06:16:59 PM AEST
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many images came to mind reading this poem, my first instinct was to say dont put anyone on a pedestal 'cause the falls a long way down, then i was worried for you, then at the end i broke into laughter, thinking it was so adorable, sorry im long winded tonight, excellent write,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: We're moving on (User Rating: 1 )
by allymp on Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 04:35:13 PM AEST
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haha thanks nessa :)

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