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Array ( [sid] => 158615 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Confused [time] => 2010-04-02 19:19:25 [hometext] => This is about the ups and downs I have been experiencing with the love of my life. [bodytext] => All the songs I hear take me back,
and all i can think of is how things have changed.

These songs used to sound beautiful and safe,
but now they just bring thoughts of losing you.

As a tear trickles down my cheek,
I know not of my real emotion.

Im aching and my chest is weak,
I feel like the fight is over now.

I am so scared of losing you,
but i feel there is no other solution.

I want to give up, but my heart wont let me,
I want to keep trying but my mind doesn't get me.

I keep thinking that the next time will be the last,
but something keeps me holding on.

I just couldn't imagine breathing without you,
You are the reason i have a reason to live.

Without you, im just an empty hole,
but perhaps sometimes that is all you're meant to be.. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 65 [informant] => helpimashark [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Confused

Contributed by helpimashark on Friday, 2nd April 2010 @ 07:19:25 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

All the songs I hear take me back,
and all i can think of is how things have changed.

These songs used to sound beautiful and safe,
but now they just bring thoughts of losing you.

As a tear trickles down my cheek,
I know not of my real emotion.

Im aching and my chest is weak,
I feel like the fight is over now.

I am so scared of losing you,
but i feel there is no other solution.

I want to give up, but my heart wont let me,
I want to keep trying but my mind doesn't get me.

I keep thinking that the next time will be the last,
but something keeps me holding on.

I just couldn't imagine breathing without you,
You are the reason i have a reason to live.

Without you, im just an empty hole,
but perhaps sometimes that is all you're meant to be..

Copyright © helpimashark ... [ 2010-04-02 19:19:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd April 2010 @ 04:35:28 PM AEST
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I really like how you pointed out how songs can trigger past emotions. So many things can send you from happy to down right depressed in seconds. A poem of truth. well written

take care
duff

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