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skin so soft, hide the scales justice you
seek, lust for pleasure of pain, as an
Angel you walk the earth, but the wings
of serpent hide, you spread demon seed.

Love you give,such a price men will pay
for the lust, not Angel dust but crimson
blood you feed upon, your feast men's
souls,Hearts to break, control you take
your smile,fools fall in deep blue eyes.

But now, as you lay beside me turn
your head, look into my eyes my love ,
we've met in past, centuries long ago
you challenged me,close now look
can you see, look deep now Yes?

Remember me?as i walked this earth before
i see now your fear, NO! I'll not shed a tear

Yes now you see ,now for you say a prayer
cast your mind back YES! i am your slayer`
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Serpent of Love

Contributed by Fuzzy on Saturday, 13th February 2010 @ 01:21:26 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Kiss so sweet,lips deceive hidden venom
skin so soft, hide the scales justice you
seek, lust for pleasure of pain, as an
Angel you walk the earth, but the wings
of serpent hide, you spread demon seed.

Love you give,such a price men will pay
for the lust, not Angel dust but crimson
blood you feed upon, your feast men's
souls,Hearts to break, control you take
your smile,fools fall in deep blue eyes.

But now, as you lay beside me turn
your head, look into my eyes my love ,
we've met in past, centuries long ago
you challenged me,close now look
can you see, look deep now Yes?

Remember me?as i walked this earth before
i see now your fear, NO! I'll not shed a tear

Yes now you see ,now for you say a prayer
cast your mind back YES! i am your slayer`
`

Copyright © Fuzzy ... [ 2010-02-13 13:21:26]
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Re: Serpent of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th February 2010 @ 03:32:05 PM AEST
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I couldn't take my eyes away
Your words left me to see the whole scene unravel
such a prolificlly gratified,and impervious write
the thrill of anticipation,the suspense truly immaculate
Every one eventually get's put in their place
superior passage

-D.Truth

Re: Serpent of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th February 2010 @ 05:43:25 PM AEST
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This has such a dark mythological feel to it. Warning signs flashing with coiled brutality waiting to feast. The words lure making you want more. Great write Fuzzy.

take care
duff

Re: Serpent of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Sunday, 14th February 2010 @ 05:32:57 AM AEST
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femme fatale.....fools fall into deep blue eyes.... then revenge ....I see now your fear....deep sense of foreboding well written

Re: Serpent of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 14th February 2010 @ 07:47:51 PM AEST
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Conclusion makes me smile..
Just lovely.
Thanks for the comment on " Fire "
-venkat

Re: Serpent of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th February 2010 @ 08:25:50 PM AEST
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Awesome poem. The imagery is excellent!!

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