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[aid] => mick
[title] => God Said No
[time] => 2010-02-12 15:59:12
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[bodytext] => If I could ask one favor of you. . . Don't take this from me this time. I know I haven't done all the right things in life And I have betrayed you so many times Forgive me for just this once. She's so scared right now And that breaks my heart I can't even imagine the outcome of this. We are born to love our sisters For everything she offers us in life And though we take it for granted A lesson is learned later. We watch as our angel is subdued to sickness That we could not prevent I shed these tears of innocence I am breathless behind your eyes All I can do at this moment Is love her and tell her it's ok. And watch with careful glances Stand by guarding this precious existence All I ask is that you save her from this pain Take me instead of her please. . . I know you've heard this so many times But it all still holds focus on the severity Of what is to come... You cannot take her now Not on my watch you won't... Try your best, do all that you deem possible... Take her away from us... Witness the flood of misery that shall insue Stand with us as we gaze upon lifeless eyes... And bury our everything... Nothing can stop you from your actions... Though I swear on all that is holy I will come for her I will rip the heavens apart in search of My star, my guiding light, my all... None of this will have to happen As I stand by her bed Eyes fixated on her stability We will make it through this madness. I keep you on the highest pedestal And forever you shall remain But if you take her from us now You take the life from us all... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 39 [informant] => jennguy41 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
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