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Array ( [sid] => 157293 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A BIttersweet Departure [time] => 2010-02-05 16:44:19 [hometext] => Depression, anger, hoplessness, alone, sad, [bodytext] => Through the bars I sit and stare
Confined in this tiny square
This prison got the best of me
My life will end so I forsee
For out escapes a hopeless sigh
I start to cough my throat so dry
I sit my knees pulled to my chest
This is all so hard to digest
When did this all become so hard
To where I am forever scarred
I feel the pressure in my head
Inside it echoes what was said
My time to leave is coming near
It’s too foggy, nothing is clear
I eat what’s left of my last meal
I weep and to the ground I kneel
For what exactly do I pray?
It doesn’t matter what I say
I stand and at the bars I wait
Im hear to seal my final fate
The guards arrive my wrists they take
My final walk I start to make
The needle plunges deep in my vain
Oddly I smile, I like the pain
Sweet poison how I wait to meet
I start to seize strapped in this seat
My eyes roll back my breath now ceased
From all this pain I’m now released




AUTHORS PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 13 [informant] => xnickix7 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
A BIttersweet Departure

Contributed by xnickix7 on Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 04:44:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Through the bars I sit and stare
Confined in this tiny square
This prison got the best of me
My life will end so I forsee
For out escapes a hopeless sigh
I start to cough my throat so dry
I sit my knees pulled to my chest
This is all so hard to digest
When did this all become so hard
To where I am forever scarred
I feel the pressure in my head
Inside it echoes what was said
My time to leave is coming near
It’s too foggy, nothing is clear
I eat what’s left of my last meal
I weep and to the ground I kneel
For what exactly do I pray?
It doesn’t matter what I say
I stand and at the bars I wait
Im hear to seal my final fate
The guards arrive my wrists they take
My final walk I start to make
The needle plunges deep in my vain
Oddly I smile, I like the pain
Sweet poison how I wait to meet
I start to seize strapped in this seat
My eyes roll back my breath now ceased
From all this pain I’m now released




AUTHORS PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.



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Re: A BIttersweet Departure (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 5th February 2010 @ 06:41:59 PM AEST
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Wow, this write is heart wrenching sad.
I'm at a loss for words.
Realy dramatic writing.
Awesome work.
huggs, blessings,
emy


Re: A BIttersweet Departure (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Saturday, 6th February 2010 @ 05:11:38 AM AEST
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sent a shiver down my spine, well written

Take care
Fuzzy





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