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Have I fallen or just been twisting,
Through the wheels of time to long.
The thought that slap me are they mine?
Lost in the middle of a insalubrious dream,
Existence show that they are up for the fight.
Consequence for my trial leads me through,
Haunting me longing for you.
Livelihood between the gray is not what it seems,
Take a look inside me you will surely see.
Fate unleashes it steel hands,
Dig in deeper showing me golden bands.
Heaven or Hell I long for a place to dwell,
In between purgatory lost again no essence to sell.
Darkness follow me around this endless fight,
Feeling to verge brought on by second sight.
Am I forced to live with iniquity all my days,
Or will the light consume me as I continue to fight.
Will I be laid to rest stuck on a unjust shelf,
Or experience the burning fires deep in Hell!…..
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~The burning fires~

Contributed by inkmaster on Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 06:00:57 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

~The burning fires~

Have I fallen or just been twisting,
Through the wheels of time to long.
The thought that slap me are they mine?
Lost in the middle of a insalubrious dream,
Existence show that they are up for the fight.
Consequence for my trial leads me through,
Haunting me longing for you.
Livelihood between the gray is not what it seems,
Take a look inside me you will surely see.
Fate unleashes it steel hands,
Dig in deeper showing me golden bands.
Heaven or Hell I long for a place to dwell,
In between purgatory lost again no essence to sell.
Darkness follow me around this endless fight,
Feeling to verge brought on by second sight.
Am I forced to live with iniquity all my days,
Or will the light consume me as I continue to fight.
Will I be laid to rest stuck on a unjust shelf,
Or experience the burning fires deep in Hell!…..
Inkmaster

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Re: ~The burning fires~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 06:32:32 AM AEST
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love this full of pain and passion.

Take care
Fuzzy

Re: ~The burning fires~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 09:38:13 PM AEST
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There seems to be an unresolved dilemma inside your words. Do we remain unhappy for the lack of equality and fairness in the world or do we burn in hell for demanding for our share? Very thought provoking and profound.

Seléne ~

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