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At lapping froth of ocean's edge
I fall to the sand with baited breath
To watch the sunset's fading light
As she falls off the earth, to make way for the night

With heart in my mouth, my soul is at peace
This moment I pray, to never cease
The warm breeze breathes comfort upon the shore
As I bathe in celestial beauty, with awe

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To Watch The Sunset

Contributed by laststarontheleft on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 04:33:47 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

x x x

At lapping froth of ocean's edge
I fall to the sand with baited breath
To watch the sunset's fading light
As she falls off the earth, to make way for the night

With heart in my mouth, my soul is at peace
This moment I pray, to never cease
The warm breeze breathes comfort upon the shore
As I bathe in celestial beauty, with awe

x x x

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Re: To Watch The Sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 07:19:58 AM AEST
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transported to another world with this one short and sweet beautifully complete nice one xx

Re: To Watch The Sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 07:47:31 AM AEST
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Nice !!!!! smiley

Re: To Watch The Sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by cindyhawkins on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 09:46:43 AM AEST
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lovely x

Re: To Watch The Sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 10:13:36 AM AEST
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Well that warmed up a frosty day, nice write.

Take care

Re: To Watch The Sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 05:09:28 PM AEST
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A lovely piece this is, akin to a hushed

dream one never wants to wake up

from . . .

thank you likewise . . .

Ben

Re: To Watch The Sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd December 2009 @ 04:48:59 AM AEST
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Sunset on the beach
what a wonder to see
I truly was there through your words
Could smell the ocean feel the breeze
And the tears a beautiful sunset brings
Very inspirational

-D.Truth

Re: To Watch The Sunset (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 05:38:06 PM AEST
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Very descriptive one can almost feel the ocean spray warm sand and see the sinking sun.You have a way with words. I enjoyed.

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