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~Questions in time ~

If I have lost how
To feel will you,
Be here for me.
When I cant take
The ups and downs of life
Anymore will you,
Be here for me.
When I wake up in
A gray way,
Will you still be here
For me.
When I am old, and worn out
Will you be here,
for me.
If my soul gets lost again
Will you be here,
For me.
When I am feeling rough
Will you be here,
For me.
If there are no more
Afters and no more befores
Will you be here,
For me.
If I rocking in a corner
Will you be here,
For me.
When my life is ready
To end
Will you be here,
For me.
I will be here always,
For here for you..
Inkmaster (C) 2009 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 43 [informant] => inkmaster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 21 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

~Questions In Time~

Contributed by inkmaster on Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 10:06:51 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

~Questions in time ~

If I have lost how
To feel will you,
Be here for me.
When I cant take
The ups and downs of life
Anymore will you,
Be here for me.
When I wake up in
A gray way,
Will you still be here
For me.
When I am old, and worn out
Will you be here,
for me.
If my soul gets lost again
Will you be here,
For me.
When I am feeling rough
Will you be here,
For me.
If there are no more
Afters and no more befores
Will you be here,
For me.
If I rocking in a corner
Will you be here,
For me.
When my life is ready
To end
Will you be here,
For me.
I will be here always,
For here for you..
Inkmaster (C) 2009

Copyright © inkmaster ... [ 2009-12-09 10:06:51]
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Re: ~Questions In Time~ (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 10:36:03 AM AEST
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This is really lovely, nicely written.
something we all hope for.. complete trust in eachother to last forever.
Star x x x

Re: ~Questions In Time~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Wednesday, 9th December 2009 @ 10:59:10 AM AEST
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Well written, and well done hope all goes well.
Take care

Re: ~Questions In Time~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th December 2009 @ 09:33:41 AM AEST
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I certainly would not think it. Why would you say such a thing?

I know you once asked for "solid" feedback, I believe? Well, I suppose a person's definition of that could vary. I think anyone who takes the time to read and comment should be thanked...and respected, unless they flat out make an attack on you. A writer...a poet should be thankful for their "fans". Is that solid? I think so.

But again, observations:

Cant and can't are two entirely different words.

If I rocking in a corner? Should it be If I'm rocking in a corner?

By no means am I an expert and will never consider myself such. However, I am a reader and by reading I think it makes for a much more enjoyable read if words are more proper in their usage. When the reader has to stop and make sense of the word or typo and say, "Oh I see what he/she means", it breaks the flow of the poetry.

Take care and I'm sure you'll get there.

Tim

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