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Array ( [sid] => 155438 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Now will you see me? [time] => 2009-11-28 11:29:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You hear me but do not see
You see me but don’t listen
I cry for your help so silently
My mind screams so violently

Why can’t you hear me
Why can’t you see
This is my cry for help so silently
I’m here, see me, and listen

Take me away from this place
To many memories here make my mind race
This is me asking for help answer my cry
Take me away from here before I just die

And yet, you walk on by
Ignoring my cry
Yet still so silently
I die, now will you see me? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Voice of the Silent [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Now will you see me?

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Saturday, 28th November 2009 @ 11:29:30 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



You hear me but do not see
You see me but don’t listen
I cry for your help so silently
My mind screams so violently

Why can’t you hear me
Why can’t you see
This is my cry for help so silently
I’m here, see me, and listen

Take me away from this place
To many memories here make my mind race
This is me asking for help answer my cry
Take me away from here before I just die

And yet, you walk on by
Ignoring my cry
Yet still so silently
I die, now will you see me?




Copyright © Voice of the Silent ... [ 2009-11-28 11:29:30]
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Re: Now will you see me? (User Rating: 1 )
by tswilkins on Saturday, 28th November 2009 @ 02:38:32 PM AEST
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So many people are crying out in the world, yet their tears are unseen, their cries are unheard, their presence is ignored. It's shameful that we live in this kind of world, but we do. That's why the people who dare to make a positive difference in the world are so important. I enjoyed reading this. It has great meaning!


Re: Now will you see me? (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 3rd December 2009 @ 02:20:20 PM AEST
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It hurts so much
Feeling lost in this world
I hope your heart finds peace
And smiles soon

Hugggggs
Kara




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