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Array ( [sid] => 155325 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unknown Fate [time] => 2009-11-24 15:17:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This story is not based up on ANY reality and it has nothing to do with anyone…It's js a thought tht passed my mind…

She is comin..I'm Sure she will…
She will show up…She always Does…
I Hv Faith…I Hv Trust…
She Hasn't Yet Left…She is still in my heart…
And I'm keeping her there…
Till The Day I Die…
Till The Day I Can't Smile…
Till The Day My Soul Fly…
She will be my friend…
She will be my fate…
She will be the one I Like…
She will be my only One…
There he sat…so silent and quite…despite of his mind…which was in a fight…with shiny memories and lights…there he sat…doing nothing at all…but waiting for her so annoyed…at their lonely secret spot…the place where she rescued his soul…and the place where he –later- will avoid…


It's been a long time…four scary nights! He spent with tearful eyes…something is wrong…something isn't right…his mind said so…but his heart said otherwise…Don't go…She will Pass by…Don't go…You Know she doesn't lie…You Know she is an ANGEL…And how could Angels lie??? Didn't you like her smile? Don't You want to see it another time??? Then wait till she arrives…She might be at Sky…Or somewhere in paradise…within a wingless angel sight…That's how she looks…With her sweet smile…At least through your own eyes…
Now a warm voice from deep…Comes up so obvious and alive…I won't leave…As long as Im Alive…I will be near…As long as I Breath…
That's wht she said…At her very last night…With a sweet smile...And a look of sympathize…Which he didn't knw why??? Until later by…He Figured out why…Tht look wasn't a lie…And Beyond tht smile…Was a lot of shouts and cries…As She said deep inside:
I'm sorry young guy…
But I really hv to fly…
Forgive me cuz this time…
Will be the last smile…
I knw u need me by…
I knw u can't survive…
Without my help and guide…
I knw u're weak and shy…
And Can't yet bite…
I Knw u will cry…
But I'm sorry sweet guy…
And She Read in his eyes:
U're my cute butterfly…
U're my guardian Angel Pie…
U took me in your life…
U held me so tight…
I felt safe and tough…
And within your arms I Cried…
And in your eyes I Hide…
I swear I could die…
Js to see u smile…
The smile tht makes u shine Bright…
U're everything I Desire…
In this huge worldwide…
Which doesn't worth a smile…
Or a wink from your eyes…

Tht was there last eye- to eye…And they both said goodbye…But he stopped her with a smile…They forgot their usual Bye…So he said holding her hand: I Luv U more than stars, glow at night and make it shine…
She looked at his eyes…And whispered so nice: I Luv U more by, Than they sparkle at sky…But Then she said inside…I'm sorry my heart…But this is the last time…Wer'e gonna hug tight…It is the last time…Our Luv shall shine bright…I will Miss U Kind guy…
Witout any further actions…He walked her to the taxi stand…And as she waved once to the cars, he waved twice to say goodbye…
Now she is gone…Now he could stop tht fake smile…Now he could remove his disguise…And delete tht artificial smile…To Reveal the real face behind…The scared and terrified eyes…And the sad look of a worried child…The one she didn't recognize…Cuz he always used to hide…His biggest fear of life…Tht she might leave him one day, but she js couldn't say…He was so afraid…Cuz he felt tht day wasn't away…He felt tht she was slipping away…He would do anything to make her stay…He would challenge the whole world, js to keep her there…He would even jump of a plane…To see tht sweet smile of her's…Hw would give her his soul…Witout any single sort…Of regret or a doubt knot…He would, if he could…
He took one last walk…To Clear his mind and thoughts…And maybe renew his soul…But unfortunately all his efforts…Lead him to nowhere Known…So he went straight home…Where he sat all alone…With his paper, pen and soul…And so he went on…Writing a letter to his friend, telling her everything he felt:….
Hey there u sweet…
I Js waned to say…
Tht I'm Really Afraid…
Cuz I feel sth strange…
Tht U Don’t wanna stay…
Promise me u wont leave…
Promise me u will always b near…
I need u so much my dear…
My guardian angel being…
I'm SORRY for any mistake…
tht I might hv done or said…
I promise I will always be here…
Whenever u need me to cheer…
I'll give u my shoulder to cry on…
I'll give u my arms to hold…
I'll give u my soul so u can fly…
We will both fly high…
To the land of NEVERLAND!!!
Where u always wanned to ground…
And where everyone around…
Is happy and satisfied…
I promise I'll take u there…
If U js promised to stay…
And nvr moved away…
I CANT let u go…
It's the first time I say:
Pls Don’t go away…
Could U js STAY???
Could U not Leave Me Babe???

He couldn’t sleep tht night…But he spent all night…Staring at stars so quite…And soon he saw the light…Sneaking in so bright…So he ran off fast…Dressed up so Nice…Took his letter in hand…And rushed to his bike…To last night's spot…But He Was js shocked!!! She is not there yet…And the place seemed dead…He sat on the bench…So silent and still…He held his letter so tight…Looking around every once and while…To Check if she has arrived…But hours passed by…Has she forgottin I??? It Cant be right!!! And wht a Rainy Night!!! He didnt notice the sky…Whn it turned into grey…And the clouds heavy with rain…Suddenly stroked to earth…Heavy rain and lights…And no one was there…Except him sitting there…Alone on the wet bench…

Now It's getting cold…But he said I wont go…She might pass by…I knw I hv to stay…Cuz I hv much to say…As he looked at his letter…He held it so tight…To protect it from rain…But the boy wasn't strong enough…So he couldn’t last long…And soon he fell to the ground…And his letter was fully damp…He suffered to get it back…Ignoring the ache in his back…Finally, with shaky eyes and hands…He opened the wet sheet…To see wht's left to read…It was a messy drowned sheet…Except for 4 clear words…Words were very harsh…They forced him to cry…It was her voice tht said:

SORRY I CAN'T STAY!!!!

The Boy fell on his back…And everything turned black….

Whispers from away…Familiar voice said:
Hun I'm here…
Wake up, pls don’t leave...
I promised I would stay,
and here I'm today…

Finally she arrived!!! She knew he wouldn't survive…She knew she needs him by…And she js couldn't deny, How much she luved his heart…And his beautiful brown eyes…Now hugging him tight…She said with wet eyes:
I'm so sorry my dear…
I promise I wont leave…
No matter how bad it seemed…
I promise I will Be near…
Js wake up and don’t leave….
Wake up my dear babe…
But was it too late???

U Decide his Fate…...



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Unknown Fate

Contributed by MidoOo on Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 03:17:52 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



This story is not based up on ANY reality and it has nothing to do with anyone…It's js a thought tht passed my mind…

She is comin..I'm Sure she will…
She will show up…She always Does…
I Hv Faith…I Hv Trust…
She Hasn't Yet Left…She is still in my heart…
And I'm keeping her there…
Till The Day I Die…
Till The Day I Can't Smile…
Till The Day My Soul Fly…
She will be my friend…
She will be my fate…
She will be the one I Like…
She will be my only One…
There he sat…so silent and quite…despite of his mind…which was in a fight…with shiny memories and lights…there he sat…doing nothing at all…but waiting for her so annoyed…at their lonely secret spot…the place where she rescued his soul…and the place where he –later- will avoid…


It's been a long time…four scary nights! He spent with tearful eyes…something is wrong…something isn't right…his mind said so…but his heart said otherwise…Don't go…She will Pass by…Don't go…You Know she doesn't lie…You Know she is an ANGEL…And how could Angels lie??? Didn't you like her smile? Don't You want to see it another time??? Then wait till she arrives…She might be at Sky…Or somewhere in paradise…within a wingless angel sight…That's how she looks…With her sweet smile…At least through your own eyes…
Now a warm voice from deep…Comes up so obvious and alive…I won't leave…As long as Im Alive…I will be near…As long as I Breath…
That's wht she said…At her very last night…With a sweet smile...And a look of sympathize…Which he didn't knw why??? Until later by…He Figured out why…Tht look wasn't a lie…And Beyond tht smile…Was a lot of shouts and cries…As She said deep inside:
I'm sorry young guy…
But I really hv to fly…
Forgive me cuz this time…
Will be the last smile…
I knw u need me by…
I knw u can't survive…
Without my help and guide…
I knw u're weak and shy…
And Can't yet bite…
I Knw u will cry…
But I'm sorry sweet guy…
And She Read in his eyes:
U're my cute butterfly…
U're my guardian Angel Pie…
U took me in your life…
U held me so tight…
I felt safe and tough…
And within your arms I Cried…
And in your eyes I Hide…
I swear I could die…
Js to see u smile…
The smile tht makes u shine Bright…
U're everything I Desire…
In this huge worldwide…
Which doesn't worth a smile…
Or a wink from your eyes…

Tht was there last eye- to eye…And they both said goodbye…But he stopped her with a smile…They forgot their usual Bye…So he said holding her hand: I Luv U more than stars, glow at night and make it shine…
She looked at his eyes…And whispered so nice: I Luv U more by, Than they sparkle at sky…But Then she said inside…I'm sorry my heart…But this is the last time…Wer'e gonna hug tight…It is the last time…Our Luv shall shine bright…I will Miss U Kind guy…
Witout any further actions…He walked her to the taxi stand…And as she waved once to the cars, he waved twice to say goodbye…
Now she is gone…Now he could stop tht fake smile…Now he could remove his disguise…And delete tht artificial smile…To Reveal the real face behind…The scared and terrified eyes…And the sad look of a worried child…The one she didn't recognize…Cuz he always used to hide…His biggest fear of life…Tht she might leave him one day, but she js couldn't say…He was so afraid…Cuz he felt tht day wasn't away…He felt tht she was slipping away…He would do anything to make her stay…He would challenge the whole world, js to keep her there…He would even jump of a plane…To see tht sweet smile of her's…Hw would give her his soul…Witout any single sort…Of regret or a doubt knot…He would, if he could…
He took one last walk…To Clear his mind and thoughts…And maybe renew his soul…But unfortunately all his efforts…Lead him to nowhere Known…So he went straight home…Where he sat all alone…With his paper, pen and soul…And so he went on…Writing a letter to his friend, telling her everything he felt:….
Hey there u sweet…
I Js waned to say…
Tht I'm Really Afraid…
Cuz I feel sth strange…
Tht U Don’t wanna stay…
Promise me u wont leave…
Promise me u will always b near…
I need u so much my dear…
My guardian angel being…
I'm SORRY for any mistake…
tht I might hv done or said…
I promise I will always be here…
Whenever u need me to cheer…
I'll give u my shoulder to cry on…
I'll give u my arms to hold…
I'll give u my soul so u can fly…
We will both fly high…
To the land of NEVERLAND!!!
Where u always wanned to ground…
And where everyone around…
Is happy and satisfied…
I promise I'll take u there…
If U js promised to stay…
And nvr moved away…
I CANT let u go…
It's the first time I say:
Pls Don’t go away…
Could U js STAY???
Could U not Leave Me Babe???

He couldn’t sleep tht night…But he spent all night…Staring at stars so quite…And soon he saw the light…Sneaking in so bright…So he ran off fast…Dressed up so Nice…Took his letter in hand…And rushed to his bike…To last night's spot…But He Was js shocked!!! She is not there yet…And the place seemed dead…He sat on the bench…So silent and still…He held his letter so tight…Looking around every once and while…To Check if she has arrived…But hours passed by…Has she forgottin I??? It Cant be right!!! And wht a Rainy Night!!! He didnt notice the sky…Whn it turned into grey…And the clouds heavy with rain…Suddenly stroked to earth…Heavy rain and lights…And no one was there…Except him sitting there…Alone on the wet bench…

Now It's getting cold…But he said I wont go…She might pass by…I knw I hv to stay…Cuz I hv much to say…As he looked at his letter…He held it so tight…To protect it from rain…But the boy wasn't strong enough…So he couldn’t last long…And soon he fell to the ground…And his letter was fully damp…He suffered to get it back…Ignoring the ache in his back…Finally, with shaky eyes and hands…He opened the wet sheet…To see wht's left to read…It was a messy drowned sheet…Except for 4 clear words…Words were very harsh…They forced him to cry…It was her voice tht said:

SORRY I CAN'T STAY!!!!

The Boy fell on his back…And everything turned black….

Whispers from away…Familiar voice said:
Hun I'm here…
Wake up, pls don’t leave...
I promised I would stay,
and here I'm today…

Finally she arrived!!! She knew he wouldn't survive…She knew she needs him by…And she js couldn't deny, How much she luved his heart…And his beautiful brown eyes…Now hugging him tight…She said with wet eyes:
I'm so sorry my dear…
I promise I wont leave…
No matter how bad it seemed…
I promise I will Be near…
Js wake up and don’t leave….
Wake up my dear babe…
But was it too late???

U Decide his Fate…...







Copyright © MidoOo ... [ 2009-11-24 15:17:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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