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Do you ever stop and stare
Down from the cloud we used to sit on
Where you sang me off to sleep

Daddy, are you there
I miss those hugs we used to share
Oh could you wrap your arms around me
If I wished it, one more time

Daddy, are you there
I miss your tender loving care
Your smile will always be imprinted
On my heart till ends of time

Oh Daddy, are you there
Is that you sparkling in the air
The heart shaped star, left of the moon
You'll never know how much your missed

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Daddy, Are You There?

Contributed by laststarontheleft on Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 09:22:50 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Daddy, are you there
Do you ever stop and stare
Down from the cloud we used to sit on
Where you sang me off to sleep

Daddy, are you there
I miss those hugs we used to share
Oh could you wrap your arms around me
If I wished it, one more time

Daddy, are you there
I miss your tender loving care
Your smile will always be imprinted
On my heart till ends of time

Oh Daddy, are you there
Is that you sparkling in the air
The heart shaped star, left of the moon
You'll never know how much your missed

x x x x x




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Re: Daddy, Are You There? (User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 07:30:15 AM AEST
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touching!!


Re: Daddy, Are You There? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 01:55:14 PM AEST
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Very good, very powerful. I especially liked this bit:

'Do you ever stop and stare
Down from the cloud we used to sit on
Where you sang me off to sleep'

Nicely done!

-Phil


Re: Daddy, Are You There? (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 05:03:15 PM AEST
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A touching and beautiful piece
I am sure he is watching
And smiling too

Smiles and hugs to you
Kara


Re: Daddy, Are You There? (User Rating: 1 )
by eternityandaday4u on Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 10:52:46 PM AEST
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wow... i love it!
:).... eternityandaday4u


Re: Daddy, Are You There? (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlightKiss on Friday, 20th November 2009 @ 09:30:24 AM AEST
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aww this is so sad :(
it made my heart ache.
great job, the best of
the best poems bring
out emotion in the
people who read them


Re: Daddy, Are You There? (User Rating: 1 )
by jdwright on Saturday, 21st November 2009 @ 12:45:48 AM AEST
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that got me cause I do the same thing......


Re: Daddy, Are You There? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 6th January 2010 @ 11:36:31 AM AEST
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losing someone almost never settles right
even when you know that someone is gone
it's always like a dream
the soul the spirit are amazing forces
It seems they move the world and never leave us
honorable topic,and write

-D.Truth




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