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Who is this person I now share my life with?
No matter how much it hurts or how many tears I’ve shed,
What hurts the most is believing in all the lies that you fed.

I feared you were cheating but I chose to ignore it, because I believed in you. I believed in us.
And now I can’t live without you, but what am I really living for?

Everything we had is gone, it doesn’t count, and it seems so unfair.
As I look at the innocence of our children playing there, I can’t help thinking that they deserved so much more than this from you.
I can forgive, but I’ll never forget this feeling of hurt that stays deep inside my fractured heart.
Now I have to try to look for a brand new start.

I so wish there was a way you could feel how I felt that day, or a way you could now cure the pain. But there is not.
So I hope the sadness in my eyes will forever help you realize what you have really done, and what cannot be undone, and what you have become.
I hope whatever you found with him was worth it.
It’s such a waste and I feel so sad, so sad.
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Who Are You?

Contributed by andrewhs on Tuesday, 10th November 2009 @ 04:43:15 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Who are you?
Who is this person I now share my life with?
No matter how much it hurts or how many tears I’ve shed,
What hurts the most is believing in all the lies that you fed.

I feared you were cheating but I chose to ignore it, because I believed in you. I believed in us.
And now I can’t live without you, but what am I really living for?

Everything we had is gone, it doesn’t count, and it seems so unfair.
As I look at the innocence of our children playing there, I can’t help thinking that they deserved so much more than this from you.
I can forgive, but I’ll never forget this feeling of hurt that stays deep inside my fractured heart.
Now I have to try to look for a brand new start.

I so wish there was a way you could feel how I felt that day, or a way you could now cure the pain. But there is not.
So I hope the sadness in my eyes will forever help you realize what you have really done, and what cannot be undone, and what you have become.
I hope whatever you found with him was worth it.
It’s such a waste and I feel so sad, so sad.




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Re: Who Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Tuesday, 10th November 2009 @ 05:29:58 AM AEST
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Like the poem very good ,life can be sad


Re: Who Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Alexa_Bachtel on Tuesday, 10th November 2009 @ 11:20:37 AM AEST
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Great poem, familiar feeling, friend.
Alexa.


Re: Who Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by jennguy41 on Tuesday, 10th November 2009 @ 09:23:04 PM AEST
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I feel your pain for I to have gone through something simular. The pain does ease but it really takes time. The pain is like a bad sting and you don't ever forget and that's the hardest part. Good Luck in all you do.


Re: Who Are You? (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Tuesday, 17th November 2009 @ 05:33:41 AM AEST
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Your thoughts are penned so well here.
I'm sorry for your pain x
I truly believe that in time, your heart
will beat strong again. Star x x x




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