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Array ( [sid] => 154409 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => paining world [time] => 2009-10-25 07:56:42 [hometext] => this poem is about an guy, who is betrayed by the whole world and he is expressing his feeling before suscide. [bodytext] => This life is filled with pain and sorrow,
I always wonder if I'll make it through tomorrow.
I don't know what I'm going to do,
I'm always missing you.

I think about the joy, laughter, and tears,
and try not to have any fears.
I close my eyes and take a deep breath,
But once again I start thinking about my death.

i dont want to live in world....
it really sucks all my blood.........
how could i adjust myself.......
when nobody wants to explain.......to me!!!!

I feel so alone,
I'm hopeless in life,
I try to be happy but only find it with a knife,
It slips through my wrists and flows from my veins,
a crimson waterfall that born from pains.

Happiness is a concept burned from my soul,
this beautiful entity now covered in shadow,
will slip from this body that’s been used as a tool,
for sex,
drugs,
I'm a worthless fool.

i dont want to live in world....
it really sucks all my blood.........
how could i adjust myself.......
when nobody wants to explain.......to me!!!!

If anyone will listen,
to what I'm about to say,
please understand the hurt I feel,
And how I got this way.

Isolated in my fears,
caught between truth and the lies.
Will someone hear me screaming,
Or hear my desperate, bleeding cries?
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 21 [informant] => praz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
paining world

Contributed by praz on Sunday, 25th October 2009 @ 07:56:42 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



This life is filled with pain and sorrow,
I always wonder if I'll make it through tomorrow.
I don't know what I'm going to do,
I'm always missing you.

I think about the joy, laughter, and tears,
and try not to have any fears.
I close my eyes and take a deep breath,
But once again I start thinking about my death.

i dont want to live in world....
it really sucks all my blood.........
how could i adjust myself.......
when nobody wants to explain.......to me!!!!

I feel so alone,
I'm hopeless in life,
I try to be happy but only find it with a knife,
It slips through my wrists and flows from my veins,
a crimson waterfall that born from pains.

Happiness is a concept burned from my soul,
this beautiful entity now covered in shadow,
will slip from this body that’s been used as a tool,
for sex,
drugs,
I'm a worthless fool.

i dont want to live in world....
it really sucks all my blood.........
how could i adjust myself.......
when nobody wants to explain.......to me!!!!

If anyone will listen,
to what I'm about to say,
please understand the hurt I feel,
And how I got this way.

Isolated in my fears,
caught between truth and the lies.
Will someone hear me screaming,
Or hear my desperate, bleeding cries?




Copyright © praz ... [ 2009-10-25 07:56:42]
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Re: paining world (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 25th October 2009 @ 07:41:52 PM AEST
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This is a well written verse
It pains me so that you are caused so much hurt though. People and life can be cruel, these days it seems worse. I will say hang in there that is all we can do, ( I know, that doesnt help much believe me I know). But do not dare think of suicide or I shall come hunt you down and whoop your arssssssss !
So there!

Hugs you and I hope you are happier.......

Michelle


Re: paining world (User Rating: 1 )
by MorguesMatter on Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 06:13:35 AM AEST
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I have been where this guy is and it brings me to tears, I found the greatest revenge on this world filled with all that will break an honest soul, is to live life to it's fullest.They should know you've found them out and then we can wait for our savior.Very sincere and human were your lines thank you-Morgues




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