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what will it take for us to believe

we are exactly the same
yet completely different
i dont want this to be over
i want it well spent

you got inside my head
you got inside my heart
when i see your smile
were back to the start

helped me to feel
helped me to see
loved me to death
helped me to breathe

i want to wake up with you
i want to sleep in
whenever i am with you i feel like i win [comments] => 3 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 48 [informant] => pat888 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
that girl

Contributed by pat888 on Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 03:12:43 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



you have you , and i have me
what will it take for us to believe

we are exactly the same
yet completely different
i dont want this to be over
i want it well spent

you got inside my head
you got inside my heart
when i see your smile
were back to the start

helped me to feel
helped me to see
loved me to death
helped me to breathe

i want to wake up with you
i want to sleep in
whenever i am with you i feel like i win




Copyright © pat888 ... [ 2009-10-21 03:12:43]
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Re: that girl (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 08:14:48 AM AEST
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not bad, but why the title , that girl, when you speak of you two
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Re: that girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Alexa_Bachtel on Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 08:40:55 AM AEST
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It's very nice, but I think this poem might've been better... Sorry.
Alex.


Re: that girl (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 08:46:44 AM AEST
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i get this.....loved me to death helped me to breath.....i like it!!!




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