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Array ( [sid] => 153872 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => chemical generation [time] => 2009-10-06 19:23:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => it starts with a sip, until then the bottles gone
you're eleven and drunk, and you just can't hold on.
then way before you know it, you're holding a fag,
you're twelve years old and you fancy a drag.
thirteen down the park, there's a spliff on the burn,
two toke pass, and then it's your turn.
you blaze weed everyday, your parents turn poor,
you're only fourteen and you're out of the door.
you're fifthteen, you're convinced weed don't touch you no more,
so you start laying on pills, and you gurn your teeth sore.
then soon you're sixteen and you're in love with that high,
you just want to rave, and drop pills til you die.

this chemical generation will ***** with your head
all night you're out raving, all day you're in bed.


seventeen in a pub, fake idea in your fist,
it cost twenty pounds, but you need to get *****.
it's your eighteenth birthday, and you're getting sent down.
at court you're prosecuted by the queen and her crown.
locked up for a year for charges of violence,
you're nineteen years old and youre living in silence.
twenty years old and you're back on the street,
but the people have changed, someones taken your seat.
you can't get a job, don't know where your heads at,
twenty one, dealing smack,
what the ***** is with that?

this chemical generation will ***** with your head
all night you're out raving, all day you're in bed.
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chemical generation

Contributed by iiloveyhuu123 on Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 07:23:28 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



it starts with a sip, until then the bottles gone
you're eleven and drunk, and you just can't hold on.
then way before you know it, you're holding a fag,
you're twelve years old and you fancy a drag.
thirteen down the park, there's a spliff on the burn,
two toke pass, and then it's your turn.
you blaze weed everyday, your parents turn poor,
you're only fourteen and you're out of the door.
you're fifthteen, you're convinced weed don't touch you no more,
so you start laying on pills, and you gurn your teeth sore.
then soon you're sixteen and you're in love with that high,
you just want to rave, and drop pills til you die.

this chemical generation will ***** with your head
all night you're out raving, all day you're in bed.


seventeen in a pub, fake idea in your fist,
it cost twenty pounds, but you need to get *****.
it's your eighteenth birthday, and you're getting sent down.
at court you're prosecuted by the queen and her crown.
locked up for a year for charges of violence,
you're nineteen years old and youre living in silence.
twenty years old and you're back on the street,
but the people have changed, someones taken your seat.
you can't get a job, don't know where your heads at,
twenty one, dealing smack,
what the ***** is with that?

this chemical generation will ***** with your head
all night you're out raving, all day you're in bed.




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Re: chemical generation (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 05:55:17 AM AEST
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Wow!!! This is my life exactly! I couldn't be more serious and relate to anyones work like I do yours!! Especially the end part about the smack....... I'm 36 and i have yet to break the strangling,mutilating hold that this stuff has on my life.... I hope you have been able to get through that and on to better things!!
Keep Writing Keep Posting!!
Peace & HUgz,
Dana


Re: chemical generation (User Rating: 1 )
by stay_gold on Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 07:22:58 AM AEST
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yes, yes, a million times, yes !


Re: chemical generation (User Rating: 1 )
by iiloveyhuu123 on Thursday, 8th October 2009 @ 02:30:51 AM AEST
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im glad you can relate to what i have written. its good to know that some people can read the poem, and understand it, almost feel it. as opposed to just reading it.




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