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Array ( [sid] => 153570 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forgotten and unspoiled [time] => 2009-09-23 17:04:08 [hometext] => is looking forward better then looking back? [bodytext] => In this lingering dimension
I see my skin , my blue eyes dingy
Wrinkly, I scorn a shrouded disgiuse
I sprout to seek senile
Id survive a century , to smile upon your demise

Inside your spirtual curtain
i am much certain
The omen bird opens his wings
I discover my caramel dream

I turn an see me
adolescent and infected with curiosity
a scent botched with a crimson amenity
Not a worry in the world , not knowing the real deal
I sit an ponder on a day activity

I close my eyes in amazement
Im charred with confusion
Scorched by my doings
My innocents warped away

I shed my skin , and escape
I dig with in , ever more deeper
I can turn your heart , turn as if a phrase
I can't grip this any longer
my demons wont let me go

MY pride morphed and lavished
all that is wrong soars up
and combusts in the electric sky [comments] => 1 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 40 [informant] => hungarianhaze [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

Forgotten and unspoiled

Contributed by hungarianhaze on Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 05:04:08 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

In this lingering dimension
I see my skin , my blue eyes dingy
Wrinkly, I scorn a shrouded disgiuse
I sprout to seek senile
Id survive a century , to smile upon your demise

Inside your spirtual curtain
i am much certain
The omen bird opens his wings
I discover my caramel dream

I turn an see me
adolescent and infected with curiosity
a scent botched with a crimson amenity
Not a worry in the world , not knowing the real deal
I sit an ponder on a day activity

I close my eyes in amazement
Im charred with confusion
Scorched by my doings
My innocents warped away

I shed my skin , and escape
I dig with in , ever more deeper
I can turn your heart , turn as if a phrase
I can't grip this any longer
my demons wont let me go

MY pride morphed and lavished
all that is wrong soars up
and combusts in the electric sky

Copyright © hungarianhaze ... [ 2009-09-23 17:04:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Forgotten and unspoiled (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyRose on Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 03:15:33 AM AEST
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a nice thought........made me wonder.....growing older we get wiser and thats the positive..the negative would be to want to go back to being young and care free...........I'd choose to be young forever.......

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