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Array ( [sid] => 153042 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => depression in school [time] => 2009-09-10 04:23:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => am so mad
am at the madness's crest
i feel it heavy like a blest on my chest
to enjoy school is my quest
but just as i enter the main door i get depressed

we are fun guys ! we love to jest
but in this school u just get stressed
uniforms like tramps we get dressed
what do u suggest ?
protest ?!?
us they'll start to arrest

the books are so many
and the pages we have to swallow and digest
so we can vomit them in the final test
from studying we don't get a chance to rest

with the teacher i have tried and messed
but the teachers are so blessed.
they are such a pest
they don't let us laugh
to make us sad is there quest
with making us mad they are obsessed
smiles from our mouths the wrest
"THE MOST CRUEL" is there contest
are u impressed ?

9 months is school i have to spend
9 months of misery
9 months of pain
9 months of slavery
how worse could this ever be !?

from this school i wanna run and flee
i wanna feel again that am free
oh mum to convince u that it sucks what is the fee ?
whatever it is i agree

HEY ! don't yell at me !!!
the **** in this school u dont see !
in this misery am chained and cuffed
help me ! gimme the key !
happy is just what we wanna be

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 300 [topic] => 67 [informant] => hetlerkh [notes] => Edited for content Moderator_18 September 10, 2009 This is the second time I have taken action on one of your posts (edit or delete due to content). If you continue with fooling the word filter your account can be put under review and considered for removal from this site. Thank you [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => schoolproblems )
depression in school

Contributed by hetlerkh on Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 04:23:41 AM in AEST
Topic: schoolproblems



am so mad
am at the madness's crest
i feel it heavy like a blest on my chest
to enjoy school is my quest
but just as i enter the main door i get depressed

we are fun guys ! we love to jest
but in this school u just get stressed
uniforms like tramps we get dressed
what do u suggest ?
protest ?!?
us they'll start to arrest

the books are so many
and the pages we have to swallow and digest
so we can vomit them in the final test
from studying we don't get a chance to rest

with the teacher i have tried and messed
but the teachers are so blessed.
they are such a pest
they don't let us laugh
to make us sad is there quest
with making us mad they are obsessed
smiles from our mouths the wrest
"THE MOST CRUEL" is there contest
are u impressed ?

9 months is school i have to spend
9 months of misery
9 months of pain
9 months of slavery
how worse could this ever be !?

from this school i wanna run and flee
i wanna feel again that am free
oh mum to convince u that it sucks what is the fee ?
whatever it is i agree

HEY ! don't yell at me !!!
the **** in this school u dont see !
in this misery am chained and cuffed
help me ! gimme the key !
happy is just what we wanna be





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Re: depression in school (User Rating: 1 )
by wood on Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 08:05:17 AM AEST
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great write next time try to make the story a little more enveloping so the reader can actually feel the story


Re: depression in school (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 10:07:53 AM AEST
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I noticed on another write of yours that you said you "know how to write English". well, actually, I thought the word was "their" instead of there.

to make us sad is there quest

Take care,

Tim
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Thank you and have a pleasant day.. or try :-)




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