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Array ( [sid] => 152823 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => (((gettin past ma gurl friend's body guard))) [time] => 2009-09-02 18:11:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => it is so hard ....
i wont even get past the guard
he'll just throw me
like a tin on da yard
cause after he look at ma id card
nothing would take his mind
last time,,,
he was so kind
so much that u would barely believe he is a mankind
his name is Joan...cute huh !?
just take a look at
how his muscles are grown
how he sharpness his nails wd a hone !
just look at his eyes n feel da moan !
bribe him !?
oh yeah ...i would just need a loan
one kick from that nice guy
and i would be far far flown
i have throwed at him a stone ...
it was nthin ....
for him its like for my dog a bone ..
to think of fightin him ....i dont
even if i do....i would use a drone
CUZ i REPEAT: i dnt want ma head flown
am nt a chicken or a *****
but that guy is archived in da beasts zone !
take a bite from him...bt first atone..
dont look at his eyes u might get blind
for breakfast he has a hind

u dont know what that guy has behind ..
why i am tryin to get past him
its for a gurl ...to love her i have signed..
its kery ...no need to remind .
for me she is totally refined
our souls were combined
our hearts were entwined !
somemone like u ....i would never find !
ma life u shined
ur in ma heart ...foreva confined
when i hear ur voice ....its like : "OH!...AM SO WINED"

for u i will break any rule
cuz ur my fuel
ur ma life time jewel
i will get past that cruel
he is a fool
just like a mule !
forget about him
without u am just a useless stool
to sperat us who'll ?
hw many tears i cryed missin u ?
A POOL !
and as for blood ..its a tot .
have u forgot
ur the only thing in dis life i'v got
i would give u anythn u want
even if i sell ma clothes ,,and wear sm rot
even to live on a cheap old yacht
to lost u .....NOT !
i LOVE u alot
tired of sweepin ma blood clots
hope to ma life u brought ,,
it was a squat.
sweety i gotta go ...i might get caught....n even get shot
love u a lot .....<3

[comments] => 0 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 2 [informant] => hetlerkh [notes] => Edited due to offensive language in context Moderator_18 September 2, 2009 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
(((gettin past ma gurl friend's body guard)))

Contributed by hetlerkh on Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 06:11:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



it is so hard ....
i wont even get past the guard
he'll just throw me
like a tin on da yard
cause after he look at ma id card
nothing would take his mind
last time,,,
he was so kind
so much that u would barely believe he is a mankind
his name is Joan...cute huh !?
just take a look at
how his muscles are grown
how he sharpness his nails wd a hone !
just look at his eyes n feel da moan !
bribe him !?
oh yeah ...i would just need a loan
one kick from that nice guy
and i would be far far flown
i have throwed at him a stone ...
it was nthin ....
for him its like for my dog a bone ..
to think of fightin him ....i dont
even if i do....i would use a drone
CUZ i REPEAT: i dnt want ma head flown
am nt a chicken or a *****
but that guy is archived in da beasts zone !
take a bite from him...bt first atone..
dont look at his eyes u might get blind
for breakfast he has a hind

u dont know what that guy has behind ..
why i am tryin to get past him
its for a gurl ...to love her i have signed..
its kery ...no need to remind .
for me she is totally refined
our souls were combined
our hearts were entwined !
somemone like u ....i would never find !
ma life u shined
ur in ma heart ...foreva confined
when i hear ur voice ....its like : "OH!...AM SO WINED"

for u i will break any rule
cuz ur my fuel
ur ma life time jewel
i will get past that cruel
he is a fool
just like a mule !
forget about him
without u am just a useless stool
to sperat us who'll ?
hw many tears i cryed missin u ?
A POOL !
and as for blood ..its a tot .
have u forgot
ur the only thing in dis life i'v got
i would give u anythn u want
even if i sell ma clothes ,,and wear sm rot
even to live on a cheap old yacht
to lost u .....NOT !
i LOVE u alot
tired of sweepin ma blood clots
hope to ma life u brought ,,
it was a squat.
sweety i gotta go ...i might get caught....n even get shot
love u a lot .....<3





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