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Array ( [sid] => 152802 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Patiently waiting for your love [time] => 2009-09-01 22:33:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When I see your face,
It warms my very soul,
Seeing your beauty,
It can't be replaced.

Your green eyes,
Your gorgeous hair,
your perfect smile,
You wanted by all the guys.

I was head over heels for you,
But when I poured my heart out,
you told me I'm not the right guy,
turning my red heart blue.

You broke my heart and soul,
reducing me to tears,
telling me we could be friends still,
which wasn't my ultimate goal.

You've given me mixed feelings of blue,
Making me happy one day, and depressed the next,
Never knowing what you really want,
I try my hardest to show my love for you.

So I patiently wait for your love,
Always trying to show you my affection,
Hoping you will figure out that I'm the right one for you,
And one day will notice my patient love.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 286 [topic] => 22 [informant] => soonerblake007 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Patiently waiting for your love

Contributed by soonerblake007 on Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 10:33:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

When I see your face,
It warms my very soul,
Seeing your beauty,
It can't be replaced.

Your green eyes,
Your gorgeous hair,
your perfect smile,
You wanted by all the guys.

I was head over heels for you,
But when I poured my heart out,
you told me I'm not the right guy,
turning my red heart blue.

You broke my heart and soul,
reducing me to tears,
telling me we could be friends still,
which wasn't my ultimate goal.

You've given me mixed feelings of blue,
Making me happy one day, and depressed the next,
Never knowing what you really want,
I try my hardest to show my love for you.

So I patiently wait for your love,
Always trying to show you my affection,
Hoping you will figure out that I'm the right one for you,
And one day will notice my patient love.

Copyright © soonerblake007 ... [ 2009-09-01 22:33:57]
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Re: Patiently waiting for your love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 11:33:41 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feeling,

hugs n' love nessa

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