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Array ( [sid] => 152731 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => NOTE TO SELF - [time] => 2009-08-30 07:50:35 [hometext] => NEVER TRUST ANYONE, EVEN IN A SONG, OR A SURVEY.... [bodytext] => Flagship sinking fast
Always running on dead legs
Running from the past
I will kill
Not to come in last
I will kill
In general
As I swallow this pill
Oh the pills
All one needs is the shade
Pulled over the eyes
Just to be who I am
In my dreams
Full control
Strength from my soul
Finding hidden meanings
In everything I see and hear
I can't say what I've got in my mind
The words are blurry
And the sounds are crude
I was born with the wrong attitude
Now tell me how do I go on
With everything crumbling around me
I refuse to be anyone's support
Because I know eventually
The weight will get too much
And I shall fall as well
No more
So be a sport
And get the hell away from me
I will crush the world
That doesn't agree with me
And all the crutches are hitting the floor
I understand that none of you understand
It comes with the territory
Its the law of the land
So take us all by the hand
And leave us
It won't make us happy
But it sure as hell
Will make us evolve
So really is the issue here
There is something to fear
We are not in control
Is this a battle for our soul?
Smile in defiance
Defy defy defy
Deny Deny Deny
Find the hidden grooves
Mathematic stimuli
You decide when you live and when you die
Rise beyond the dead hills of devastation
Mass publication
Find the world that exists
Outside the lines
Know it, feel it
Become it
No one knows
But yourself
For sure
Redefine
and you'll be fine
For it's something that I demand
For it is the law of my land
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NOTE TO SELF -

Contributed by Onslaught on Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 07:50:35 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Flagship sinking fast
Always running on dead legs
Running from the past
I will kill
Not to come in last
I will kill
In general
As I swallow this pill
Oh the pills
All one needs is the shade
Pulled over the eyes
Just to be who I am
In my dreams
Full control
Strength from my soul
Finding hidden meanings
In everything I see and hear
I can't say what I've got in my mind
The words are blurry
And the sounds are crude
I was born with the wrong attitude
Now tell me how do I go on
With everything crumbling around me
I refuse to be anyone's support
Because I know eventually
The weight will get too much
And I shall fall as well
No more
So be a sport
And get the hell away from me
I will crush the world
That doesn't agree with me
And all the crutches are hitting the floor
I understand that none of you understand
It comes with the territory
Its the law of the land
So take us all by the hand
And leave us
It won't make us happy
But it sure as hell
Will make us evolve
So really is the issue here
There is something to fear
We are not in control
Is this a battle for our soul?
Smile in defiance
Defy defy defy
Deny Deny Deny
Find the hidden grooves
Mathematic stimuli
You decide when you live and when you die
Rise beyond the dead hills of devastation
Mass publication
Find the world that exists
Outside the lines
Know it, feel it
Become it
No one knows
But yourself
For sure
Redefine
and you'll be fine
For it's something that I demand
For it is the law of my land




Copyright © Onslaught ... [ 2009-08-30 07:50:35]
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Re: NOTE TO SELF - (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 01:14:34 AM AEST
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BRAVO!!!!!! Ecclectic very rough and real!! you say whats in your mind right then and let it come out and onto the screen with no hesitations!! Thats a verygood sign of your work growing hellla stronger every day!!
Keep writing & Keep Sharing!!
Peace & Hugz,
Dana




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