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Array ( [sid] => 152582 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Naturally [time] => 2009-08-25 22:49:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

Wandering through the wildflowers,
with silent breath of memories
I note the dew on every blossom,
and cast my sighs into the breeze
The distant ocean seems to call me,
as her rolling waves are heard
Oh how I wish for feathered wings,
to fly freely with the birds
Beneath my naked feet,
but for the jewellery on my toes
I can feel the beautiful earth ,
from where her smiles grow

Shadows of the afternoon,
come play upon my skin
To touch upon the places,
where innocence has been

Rising from the very depths,
of my collective soul
Comes a feeling of tranquility,
new hope to make me whole
With fabricated skin now gone,
I move among the trees
Boundless in my nakedness,
dressed only of the breeze
Dark braids have now fallen,
to caress my shoulders bare
My body but a whisper,
as it wanders without care

~~my mountain home,where I used to live~ [comments] => 9 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 27 [informant] => ChenoaShiningwater [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

Naturally

Contributed by ChenoaShiningwater on Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 10:49:10 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Wandering through the wildflowers,
with silent breath of memories
I note the dew on every blossom,
and cast my sighs into the breeze
The distant ocean seems to call me,
as her rolling waves are heard
Oh how I wish for feathered wings,
to fly freely with the birds
Beneath my naked feet,
but for the jewellery on my toes
I can feel the beautiful earth ,
from where her smiles grow

Shadows of the afternoon,
come play upon my skin
To touch upon the places,
where innocence has been

Rising from the very depths,
of my collective soul
Comes a feeling of tranquility,
new hope to make me whole
With fabricated skin now gone,
I move among the trees
Boundless in my nakedness,
dressed only of the breeze
Dark braids have now fallen,
to caress my shoulders bare
My body but a whisper,
as it wanders without care

~~my mountain home,where I used to live~

Copyright © ChenoaShiningwater ... [ 2009-08-25 22:49:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Naturally (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 11:02:48 PM AEST
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Geezzzzzzzz, I am now dreaming and so caught up and lost, in awe I am. You paint such beauty.

Michelle

Re: Naturally (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 12:44:16 AM AEST
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Okay, uh, like I wanna be there or something.

Anyway, yeah!!!

Re: Naturally (User Rating: 1 )
by ChenoaShiningwater on Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 12:52:48 AM AEST
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*looks up n throws cushion* LMAO...thanks for the smile :P

Re: Naturally (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 01:13:15 AM AEST
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You have painted a beautiful picture with your selected words I could feel emotion
Great job

Re: Naturally (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 08:17:46 AM AEST
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A lovely piece, very vivid and emotional.

-Phil

Re: Naturally (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 04:45:17 PM AEST
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"The distant ocean seems to call me,
as her rolling waves are heard
Oh how I wish for feathered wings,
to fly freely with the birds"

I seem to have this dream when the ocean calls me... Great imagery, Chenoa.
Keep them coming...

Jenni

Re: Naturally (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 04:09:05 AM AEST
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( smiles)

Roses at your feet
Larry

Re: Naturally (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 08:28:10 PM AEST
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this is so lovely, gentle and enchanting!

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Naturally (User Rating: 1 )
by windowguy on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 12:50:28 PM AEST
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Can't help but have that 'feel-good' feeling whilst reading this. Well written.

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