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Geez, do I need to spell it out?
Yes maybe I am being a bit smart.
I always give everyone hugs
yet now I sit and pout.

Where are my hugs?

So I agree with tweety
this really fits the tee.
I want all the hugs I feel
that should be coming just for me.

Ya know it wont kill you......

So for this second in a verse
I am expressing my deepest feeling.
Well at least for this second
I want to be in lots of hugs a swimming.

I love those hugs ya know?

So I guess I can pretend
and write poetry with tweety.
And sit and daydream at the computer
of all the hugs that I am getting.....

Or not......... mmmmmm whatever

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~So Come On~

Contributed by shelby on Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 09:49:18 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



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Geez, do I need to spell it out?
Yes maybe I am being a bit smart.
I always give everyone hugs
yet now I sit and pout.

Where are my hugs?

So I agree with tweety
this really fits the tee.
I want all the hugs I feel
that should be coming just for me.

Ya know it wont kill you......

So for this second in a verse
I am expressing my deepest feeling.
Well at least for this second
I want to be in lots of hugs a swimming.

I love those hugs ya know?

So I guess I can pretend
and write poetry with tweety.
And sit and daydream at the computer
of all the hugs that I am getting.....

Or not......... mmmmmm whatever





Copyright © shelby ... [ 2009-08-21 21:49:18]
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Re: ~So Come On~ (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 10:09:17 PM AEST
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I certainly know what that feels like.
Well done.
huggs, big ole huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: ~So Come On~ (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 10:54:58 PM AEST
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An awesom write, the artist temperment is not to be toyed with, nor there emotions . . .


thank you likewise for your comment and
support . . .


((((Michelle))))



Ben


Re: ~So Come On~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 11:04:09 PM AEST
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Re: ~So Come On~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 04:52:08 PM AEST
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Very funny and creative love the pic made me laugh


Re: ~So Come On~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 08:45:30 PM AEST
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happy and cute:)

hugs n' love nessa


Re: ~So Come On~ (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 03:29:01 AM AEST
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Hugs are the magic that bring us all to the space of peaceful reasoning.....imagine instead of bullits...we had a hug war.....
good write and big hugs to you........ND




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