Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	12-June 18:02:56 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 151764 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Letter To Mary-Jane [time] => 2009-07-28 08:36:16 [hometext] => "Letter i wrote a while back, to my very own Mary-Jane" [bodytext] => Mary-Jane; the angel nesting in my dreams,
The dream catcher to my soul,
and i struggle to see days where you, I can fearlessly hold.

My powers are fading without you near,
loosing grip to climb over these walls of emotion,
and i'm unable to spin a web to cling to devotion.

I'm caught in my own web,
the same web spun for villanous thoughts,
thoughts against my joyful heart,
for it's you i've adored from my heroic start.

I battle the world's evil for bright futures,
dodging the worlds weapons through epic days,
and my heart exposed to such savagery slowy decays.

I am lost behind the facade which is spiderman,
yet it's a part of me i fail to escape,
afraid of an enemies revenge returning late.

Hatred lingers for villans keeping us apart,
They have perfected misery,
providing you tears with their formidable art.

With great power comes great resposibilty,
The words trap me behind this costume,
and my reality now fades into the adventures of a cartoon...

So i now swing through the city,
The breeze comforts my restless soul,
which impatiently awaits autherisation,
to cross the border and escape infactuation.

I close my eyes locking tears inside,
reminicing of The Parker i used to be,
A nerd seeking your smile through day,
whether friendly or a romantic cliche'.

So I now remove my spidey mask,
greeting this nerdy reflextion of me,
abandoning ideas of us,
and setting a unpredictable future free.

So I write you Mary-Jane this letter,
saying for us to remain friends i didn't plan,
but remember my feelings for you are ageless,
living in the halls of Never Never Land.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 2 [informant] => daylynn_van_wyk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Letter To Mary-Jane

Contributed by daylynn_van_wyk on Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 08:36:16 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Mary-Jane; the angel nesting in my dreams,
The dream catcher to my soul,
and i struggle to see days where you, I can fearlessly hold.

My powers are fading without you near,
loosing grip to climb over these walls of emotion,
and i'm unable to spin a web to cling to devotion.

I'm caught in my own web,
the same web spun for villanous thoughts,
thoughts against my joyful heart,
for it's you i've adored from my heroic start.

I battle the world's evil for bright futures,
dodging the worlds weapons through epic days,
and my heart exposed to such savagery slowy decays.

I am lost behind the facade which is spiderman,
yet it's a part of me i fail to escape,
afraid of an enemies revenge returning late.

Hatred lingers for villans keeping us apart,
They have perfected misery,
providing you tears with their formidable art.

With great power comes great resposibilty,
The words trap me behind this costume,
and my reality now fades into the adventures of a cartoon...

So i now swing through the city,
The breeze comforts my restless soul,
which impatiently awaits autherisation,
to cross the border and escape infactuation.

I close my eyes locking tears inside,
reminicing of The Parker i used to be,
A nerd seeking your smile through day,
whether friendly or a romantic cliche'.

So I now remove my spidey mask,
greeting this nerdy reflextion of me,
abandoning ideas of us,
and setting a unpredictable future free.

So I write you Mary-Jane this letter,
saying for us to remain friends i didn't plan,
but remember my feelings for you are ageless,
living in the halls of Never Never Land.

Copyright © daylynn_van_wyk ... [ 2009-07-28 08:36:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Letter To Mary-Jane (User Rating: 1 )
by Lele on Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 12:19:55 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

As I've thought a poem talking about spiderman's lover. I think very written, spite some rythm breaks. The rime is good and the content, a very usual theme used as an unusual concept (as taken by Comic Books).

Congratulations,

Leandro Monteiro

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com