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As I stand here at the corner, broken and spent
I look back wondering where my life has went
I did not come here so you could watch me die
Just to tell you I love you and respectfully say good-bye

I have destroyed everything that has entered my life
Finally chasing away my kids and my wife
Single handedly forcing the sunshine to recede
Causing every humans heart to bleed

You had always warned I would die a lonely old man
I know you were not my number one fan
Now we have come to a point such as this
My last act of love, to your cheek I place a kiss

I will now bid you farewell
My future awaits me in Hell

Good-Bye

Deadwriter
07/14/2009
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The Last Write

Contributed by deadwriter on Tuesday, 14th July 2009 @ 12:33:45 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

The Last Write

As I stand here at the corner, broken and spent
I look back wondering where my life has went
I did not come here so you could watch me die
Just to tell you I love you and respectfully say good-bye

I have destroyed everything that has entered my life
Finally chasing away my kids and my wife
Single handedly forcing the sunshine to recede
Causing every humans heart to bleed

You had always warned I would die a lonely old man
I know you were not my number one fan
Now we have come to a point such as this
My last act of love, to your cheek I place a kiss

I will now bid you farewell
My future awaits me in Hell

Good-Bye

Deadwriter
07/14/2009

Copyright © deadwriter ... [ 2009-07-14 12:33:45]
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Re: The Last Write (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 11:52:01 AM AEST
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OH my what in the heck is going on?
This is deeply emotional.
You ok? You better not be saying goodbye I will hunt you down.

Hugs
Michelle

Re: The Last Write (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 01:50:49 PM AEST
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I am sorry things appear to be going so badly for you now. I hope you are not thinking of leaving in any way, shape, or form. I am relatively new to this site, but love reading your works and can tell you are a truly good soul in your writing. Please send me a message if you need anything, I will be there to listen. Great poem full of emotion!

--Heidi

Re: The Last Write (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 03:13:40 PM AEST
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Hey, you know I hate these types of writes, no matter how good they are. What is happening to you is not the end of the world... but if it helps to write, then I understand. I'll talk to you again soon...
Hugs
Jenni

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