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[sid] => 151420
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Devided
[time] => 2009-07-11 04:04:24
[hometext] => I have already posted this as song lyric, however people does not seem to ream em' - and I would love to get some comments on this song.
[bodytext] => This is a song switching between slow & fast tempo, I would like to hear what you think this song is about and what it means to you. We are already using in it our band, and mostly I post it as an inspiration to others, I really hope that you would share your thoughts about my lyric. Thank you very much for reading. -Mark Tossed- I was, Among the roots of trees I spire, Lost- I was, In the streets where hope expire, Devided between two worlds I find myself, Shattered thoughts tries to communicate, Under the sun you find yourself, Make up your mind, 'cause I can't wait, - Feelings rush through a broken vein, Love is not for your soul to drain, A white lion is gaurding your home, Keeping you from being alone, In pain- I was, Due to the lack of love I felt, Insane- I was, Obtained by the sorrow that made me melt, Devided between two worlds I find myself, Shattered thoughts tries to communicate, Under the sun you find yourself, Make up your mind, 'cause I can't wait, - A star flicked across an open sky, Sacred unicorns share their lie, Grey tear turns into blood, Shareing their wisdom with the mud, >>>- SOLO -<<< Devided between two worlds I find myself, Shattered thoughts tries to communicate, Under the sun you find yourself, Make up your mind, 'cause I can't wait, For you- I wait-, For you- I wait-, For you-, my so-o-oh-ul-mate... © by: Mark Glenn Jespersen (already a lyric to one of my songs) [comments] => 0 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Saft [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
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