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Array ( [sid] => 151177 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Note To Self pt. 1 [time] => 2009-06-30 13:05:01 [hometext] => Very personal...hope you enjoy the first part [bodytext] => Help! I scream
But no one can hear me,
No one can see me,
No one..but the nightmare that chases me.
Right there is the exit where I can be free
But further and further it seems to be away from me.

How could this happen?
Can't find the connection
Then I'm caught, BOOM I drop
I've lost all my protection!
The light flashes & I'm forced to look at my reflection.

Who is She?
This human being I cannot perceive to be me.
Could this be what's twisting & churning,
Burning my insides,
Yearning for the chance to come alive?

No!
She was buried at 13!
Maybe I forgot to say R.I.P
Now She's come back to haunt me,
Taunt me with reality
Truths to which I chose to be naive to.

Memories have reprised now that I look into Her eyes
Those eyes that threaten to be the cause of my demise
The reason why each night I cry,
Why I choose to hide
But there is nowhere to turn
Because it's me She's set out to find...

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 61 [informant] => ginabelle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Note To Self pt. 1

Contributed by ginabelle on Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 01:05:01 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Help! I scream
But no one can hear me,
No one can see me,
No one..but the nightmare that chases me.
Right there is the exit where I can be free
But further and further it seems to be away from me.

How could this happen?
Can't find the connection
Then I'm caught, BOOM I drop
I've lost all my protection!
The light flashes & I'm forced to look at my reflection.

Who is She?
This human being I cannot perceive to be me.
Could this be what's twisting & churning,
Burning my insides,
Yearning for the chance to come alive?

No!
She was buried at 13!
Maybe I forgot to say R.I.P
Now She's come back to haunt me,
Taunt me with reality
Truths to which I chose to be naive to.

Memories have reprised now that I look into Her eyes
Those eyes that threaten to be the cause of my demise
The reason why each night I cry,
Why I choose to hide
But there is nowhere to turn
Because it's me She's set out to find...

Copyright © ginabelle ... [ 2009-06-30 13:05:01]
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Re: Note To Self pt. 1 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 30th June 2009 @ 06:49:36 PM AEST
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Intense. I feel much pain and fear in this. Very nice writing.

Tim

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