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i want to make you close your eyes.

Contributed by heather211 on Tuesday, 23rd June 2009 @ 06:09:48 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

i've been waiting on this long hard day to get over,so i can rest my head on your shoulder,i just want to lay here and hear you breathe,and listen to your heartbeat,and see where it leads.we're wide awake. but i want to make you close your eyes,and say my name like only you can say then hold you tight,all i need is only you and me tonight.i wanna make you close your eyes,you can make me work for it,if you want to.just leave a little trail for me to follow you through.and if you need a little help from me there ain't a button i can't reach.le'ts see where it leads.we're wide awake but i want to make you fall asleep. so close your eyes and i'll hold you tight .i want to take you somewhere out there out of sight i dont want to let you go another night.i never want to leave your side, so it's o.k .to close your eyes..

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Re: i want to make you close your eyes. (User Rating: 1 )
by voyage on Friday, 8th October 2010 @ 02:52:35 PM AEST
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Oh how I love your poem this is wonderful!

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