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deep into the being
of self unrealized
and daunting to the light.

The steel blade
sinking in deeply
and forsaking the moments
of hushed loves demise.

A wound
seeping profoundly
non healing, unhealthy
a scar to the heart.

Fractured
it lays slayed
wounded and not mended
laying cold on the stone ground. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 282 [topic] => 13 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Cold

Contributed by shelby on Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 09:55:24 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

It penetrates
deep into the being
of self unrealized
and daunting to the light.

The steel blade
sinking in deeply
and forsaking the moments
of hushed loves demise.

A wound
seeping profoundly
non healing, unhealthy
a scar to the heart.

Fractured
it lays slayed
wounded and not mended
laying cold on the stone ground.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2009-06-01 21:55:24]
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Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 10:08:40 PM AEST
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Oh, Shell.....I think I might know what that
"it" you speak of is. I think it's the stone
that use to be my heart. This is a punch
to the gut, and yet, lovely, in it's pain and
simplicity. It spoke volumes to me.

Love,
~d

Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by simsalabim on Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 10:43:29 PM AEST
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oh...the horror!

Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 11:20:37 PM AEST
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Duh-aaam, Michelle. This is powerful! Very nice imagery and metaphors!
Very Timpressive, uh, I mean imbressive.

:D

Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st June 2009 @ 11:22:13 PM AEST
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D'oh! Meant impressive.

Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 12:28:54 AM AEST
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I like it. Makes me think of my friend..not for good reasons but it does

great poem very dark and I like that
hope to read more soon
-Kelly

Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 11:15:10 AM AEST
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Oh me girl,
I can remember feeling this way too many times but I made it thru and you will too.
Now their just past that is only a bad memory.
It'll all come out in the wash cycle so hang tuff deary. I have confidence in you that you'll be tried in the fire but come forth as gold.
Luv's ya,
emy

Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Sunday, 28th June 2009 @ 04:19:42 PM AEST
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I love this poem. Powerful language used here. It paints of realistic picture and I can feel the pain within. Truly magical!

Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Cathi on Thursday, 2nd July 2009 @ 03:16:33 AM AEST
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A very dark and powerful poem. I love the images you use to create a sense of the mood that inspires them.

Cathi

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