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Array ( [sid] => 150235 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The fragililty of Tranquility [time] => 2009-05-28 14:17:06 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Walking along the river
Seeing beauty at every turn,
I sensed a sweet serenity
As my heart did truly burn.

Birds were flying carefree
High up in the blue,
Enjoying the sunshine it seemed,
Warming each wing so new.

Daffodils, like trumpets of gold
Appeared to dance in the breeze,
And a fleet of Mallards swam
Beneath Weeping Willow trees.

Suddenly, out of the blue,
A jet fighter screamed overhead
And left a ringing in my ears
And my nerves hung on a thread.

Next, a juggernaut thundered
Along the road nearby
Causing me to let out
A very irritated sigh.

Just then a fire-engine’s siren
Blurted out its raucous noise
Alerting all to make way
For those heroic boys.

This fast-paced world too soon
Will snatch away our peace,
So, we need to savour each minute
Before life’s stresses increase.

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The fragililty of Tranquility

Contributed by windowguy on Thursday, 28th May 2009 @ 02:17:06 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Walking along the river
Seeing beauty at every turn,
I sensed a sweet serenity
As my heart did truly burn.

Birds were flying carefree
High up in the blue,
Enjoying the sunshine it seemed,
Warming each wing so new.

Daffodils, like trumpets of gold
Appeared to dance in the breeze,
And a fleet of Mallards swam
Beneath Weeping Willow trees.

Suddenly, out of the blue,
A jet fighter screamed overhead
And left a ringing in my ears
And my nerves hung on a thread.

Next, a juggernaut thundered
Along the road nearby
Causing me to let out
A very irritated sigh.

Just then a fire-engine’s siren
Blurted out its raucous noise
Alerting all to make way
For those heroic boys.

This fast-paced world too soon
Will snatch away our peace,
So, we need to savour each minute
Before life’s stresses increase.

Copyright Â© windowguy ... [ 2009-05-28 14:17:06]
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Re: The fragililty of Tranquility (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 28th May 2009 @ 04:43:56 PM AEST
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Hi Windowguy, I thoroughly enjoyed this.. the flow, the slow pace at the beginning, the imagery..all of it... Thank you for sharing.... We really do need to savour the serenity...
Jenni

Re: The fragililty of Tranquility (User Rating: 1 )
by SirCallower on Thursday, 28th May 2009 @ 11:50:57 PM AEST
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Great job
you started to paint this peaceful image in my head, only to have me face plant with reality.
good job on NOT using the same old generic decription words too
4 stars from me

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