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Array ( [sid] => 150234 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Meaning Never Meant So Little [time] => 2009-05-28 13:35:40 [hometext] => Basically a conversation. Choose your own meaning. [bodytext] => We meet again
A nod of the head in acknowledgement
My ears shattered, your words I could not grasp
"A sunbeam hit my eye; consciousness abloished"
Conversation subtle, for words we did not need
Your eyes a million shrieking winds by themselves

This is no disguise, despite what it seems
A smirk, a grin, never hid your sin
Not knowing, nor hiding your intentions
Guessing no more, you no as well as I

"Communication is rare for me; I'd rather you come find me"
Returned to your own life, and I to mine
I didn't get to see you turn your face away
Twilight fades near, the dawn I fear
You weren't even there
Farewell

(Was originally written the other way; but it sounded better this way.) [comments] => 1 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 31 [informant] => GravityEatsTheDawn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

Meaning Never Meant So Little

Contributed by GravityEatsTheDawn on Thursday, 28th May 2009 @ 01:35:40 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

We meet again
A nod of the head in acknowledgement
My ears shattered, your words I could not grasp
"A sunbeam hit my eye; consciousness abloished"
Conversation subtle, for words we did not need
Your eyes a million shrieking winds by themselves

This is no disguise, despite what it seems
A smirk, a grin, never hid your sin
Not knowing, nor hiding your intentions
Guessing no more, you no as well as I

"Communication is rare for me; I'd rather you come find me"
Returned to your own life, and I to mine
I didn't get to see you turn your face away
Twilight fades near, the dawn I fear
You weren't even there
Farewell

(Was originally written the other way; but it sounded better this way.)

Copyright © GravityEatsTheDawn ... [ 2009-05-28 13:35:40]
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Re: Meaning Never Meant So Little (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 07:44:49 PM AEST
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I found myself pondering on many meanings in this one. I shall read it once more.
You captured lovely emotion in this write.
I also enjoyed the fact it was left a bit elusive, leaving everyone to ponder on it some.

Good work and welcome to YPDC

Hugs
Michelle

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