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Array ( [sid] => 149664 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Walls Surround Me [time] => 2009-05-05 13:53:49 [hometext] => don't read if you don't like depressing endings [bodytext] => Do not look at me so intently
I see you staring
I stare back, afraid you will kill me if I look away
I suppose I am paranoid-- No, I know
I sigh and look down, then around me
Realizing that the walls surround me
I cannot trust myself
I cannot trust this room
The walls speak to me
Telling me to do things that I cannot
I pull my pillow towards me and hug it
It is my only excape in this room
The room with walls that surround me
I have never felt so...
Dead.

The walls surround me
Speaking to me in languages I do not understand
Instead of ordering me to do terrible things
I feel like I am being swallowed up
This room with white walls
I stare endlessly at each wall,
For fear they will hurt me
With their words or weapons

I know I am psycho
My pillow told me so
The bed rolls when I lay on it
The floors wobble when I walk on them
And the windows make the world wavy when I look out them
I need to be put somewhere to die
To die alone and uncared for
I want to wander the Earth as an angel
A fallen angel from heaven above...

Maybe I will get my wish... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 346 [topic] => 59 [informant] => Innocent_Sinner [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
Walls Surround Me

Contributed by Innocent_Sinner on Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 01:53:49 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



Do not look at me so intently
I see you staring
I stare back, afraid you will kill me if I look away
I suppose I am paranoid-- No, I know
I sigh and look down, then around me
Realizing that the walls surround me
I cannot trust myself
I cannot trust this room
The walls speak to me
Telling me to do things that I cannot
I pull my pillow towards me and hug it
It is my only excape in this room
The room with walls that surround me
I have never felt so...
Dead.

The walls surround me
Speaking to me in languages I do not understand
Instead of ordering me to do terrible things
I feel like I am being swallowed up
This room with white walls
I stare endlessly at each wall,
For fear they will hurt me
With their words or weapons

I know I am psycho
My pillow told me so
The bed rolls when I lay on it
The floors wobble when I walk on them
And the windows make the world wavy when I look out them
I need to be put somewhere to die
To die alone and uncared for
I want to wander the Earth as an angel
A fallen angel from heaven above...

Maybe I will get my wish...




Copyright © Innocent_Sinner ... [ 2009-05-05 13:53:49]
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Re: Walls Surround Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 02:30:06 PM AEST
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How I often wished this upon myself many times... This is an excellent poem!


Re: Walls Surround Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 08:24:37 PM AEST
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I like it! I just wrote a poem of the voices in my head. Similar to the ones you hear in the walls. And don't worry everyone is crazy now the fact that people won't admit it only proves the point.

great write
hope to read more soon
-kelly


Re: Walls Surround Me (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlightKiss on Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 11:44:13 AM AEST
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oh han, you're gonna get some crazy comments on this poem...




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