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Array ( [sid] => 149198 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pain In Disguise [time] => 2009-04-17 16:46:11 [hometext] => This somehow made it back to me!!This plus many others were in my jeep and it was stolen,but out of nowhere I find a huge chunk of my work put safely away in my sis's attic! Don't even remember putting it away!an oldie so let me know if it's a goodie [bodytext] => Pain in Disguise
by: PepperMint
Ki$$e$
2008/09 orig
Poetry

Time passes by
right before
my eyes,
I watch as
my life
silently
dies......

Can
anyone
see the
Pain
Deep
Inside?....
My own
reflection
when I
look into the
Mirror I
sometimes
don't even
Recognize.............

I'm lost,
and
I'm Confused
to scared to
Realize,
I can't even
look into
my
own eyes

So I put on
my
Daily
Disguise,
The only thing
i can treasure
that i can
call mine are
the Tears I cried................................ [comments] => 7 [counter] => 432 [topic] => 61 [informant] => InfinitePoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Pain In Disguise

Contributed by InfinitePoet on Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 04:46:11 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Pain in Disguise
by: PepperMint
Ki$$e$
2008/09 orig
Poetry

Time passes by
right before
my eyes,
I watch as
my life
silently
dies......

Can
anyone
see the
Pain
Deep
Inside?....
My own
reflection
when I
look into the
Mirror I
sometimes
don't even
Recognize.............

I'm lost,
and
I'm Confused
to scared to
Realize,
I can't even
look into
my
own eyes

So I put on
my
Daily
Disguise,
The only thing
i can treasure
that i can
call mine are
the Tears I cried................................




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Re: Pain In Disguise (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 05:03:05 PM AEST
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it had a good flow to it, good work.

-Phil


Re: Pain In Disguise (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 06:02:56 PM AEST
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I also liked the flow in this.
This also has content in it everyone can relate to.
Good work.
Welcome to YPDC

Michelle


Re: Pain In Disguise (User Rating: 1 )
by Aspirant on Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 06:38:27 AM AEST
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Just curious if you listen to Linkin Park because many parts of it reminded me of a few of their songs. Then again, as someone else mentioned these are fairly universal themes.


Re: Pain In Disguise (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 07:18:06 AM AEST
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Yes, very easy to relate to. Regardless of that, I think it was very well put together.


Re: Pain In Disguise (User Rating: 1 )
by the-phoenix on Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 10:53:26 AM AEST
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keep up buddy!
you have it


Re: Pain In Disguise (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 09:11:54 PM AEST
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I agree that it has a nice flow. The feel is good too. Liked your use of the peppermint candy


Re: Pain In Disguise (User Rating: 1 )
by Jlokitty on Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 04:35:49 PM AEST
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really enjoyed it. Good job =)




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