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Array ( [sid] => 149020 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One last poem [time] => 2009-04-09 17:45:29 [hometext] => My last poem here [bodytext] => My hurt is breaking through me,
Putting up the illusion that you see
Covering up the feelings that lie inside,
Building coverage, making places to hide

This person you see staggering in front of you,
The person is putting wounds together with glue
Staining lips and numbing bone,
Heavier heart and all alone

Pushing forehead in with palm of hand,
Let body fall and break wherever it may land
Constant filling of empty and forced-in air,
Disappointment and ache lie everywhere

Watch me from up there looking down from white clouds of clean water and rain,
Look at the person rolling in mud underneath, what reason do you have to complain?
All the temporary irritations that appear can be fixed, rearranged, and cured,
Nothing you値l ever encounter or face will add up to anything I have endured

Continue as I know you will playing your part in this life,
From this chest I値l keep away this forever tempting knife
I will live on, day by day, night by beautiful midnight,
Carrying on in this darkness, chasing the faint moonlight

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Bluethewolf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
One last poem

Contributed by Bluethewolf on Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 05:45:29 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



My hurt is breaking through me,
Putting up the illusion that you see
Covering up the feelings that lie inside,
Building coverage, making places to hide

This person you see staggering in front of you,
The person is putting wounds together with glue
Staining lips and numbing bone,
Heavier heart and all alone

Pushing forehead in with palm of hand,
Let body fall and break wherever it may land
Constant filling of empty and forced-in air,
Disappointment and ache lie everywhere

Watch me from up there looking down from white clouds of clean water and rain,
Look at the person rolling in mud underneath, what reason do you have to complain?
All the temporary irritations that appear can be fixed, rearranged, and cured,
Nothing you値l ever encounter or face will add up to anything I have endured

Continue as I know you will playing your part in this life,
From this chest I値l keep away this forever tempting knife
I will live on, day by day, night by beautiful midnight,
Carrying on in this darkness, chasing the faint moonlight





Copyright ツゥ Bluethewolf ... [ 2009-04-09 17:45:29]
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Re: One last poem (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 07:48:50 AM AEST
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An interesting write, I only have one disagreement and that is.

"Nothing you値l ever encounter or face will add up to anything I have endured"

Trust me on this I think the things I've faced, and the things I done might be enough.

But nice write anyway.

The Phantom


Re: One last poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 05:39:03 PM AEST
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It's unfortunate that you won't be posting anymore. I hope in time that you change your mind as this is very good writing. Sad but very nicely written.

Tim




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