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Array ( [sid] => 14885 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => my heart is nothing but a bruise [time] => 2003-03-25 17:05:00 [hometext] => this poem is brought to you by COCA COLA.....mmmmmm Coca Cola...drink some. [bodytext] => the day beckons me to rise
but i am not yet ready to awaken
i feel the sounds of silence
my hearts nothing but a bruise
im glad that it feels this way

and i come back to this familiar place
deja vu
so i cant help but love her
she is mine while i am hers
presence in this dying life
the passing of the earth suffice me

that is until she bores me

all i am are ashes of a burnt out love
it takes strength to live the day
it takes the eyes of a blind man
to ignore the pain

i wish i never had to open my eyes
i want to live in a dream where
everything that could never be
somehow is...
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my heart is nothing but a bruise

Contributed by fallensilence on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

the day beckons me to rise
but i am not yet ready to awaken
i feel the sounds of silence
my hearts nothing but a bruise
im glad that it feels this way

and i come back to this familiar place
deja vu
so i cant help but love her
she is mine while i am hers
presence in this dying life
the passing of the earth suffice me

that is until she bores me

all i am are ashes of a burnt out love
it takes strength to live the day
it takes the eyes of a blind man
to ignore the pain

i wish i never had to open my eyes
i want to live in a dream where
everything that could never be
somehow is...

Copyright © fallensilence ... [ 2003-03-25 17:05:00]
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Re: my heart is nothing but a bruise (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 07:09:09 PM AEST
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Oh wow... nice write! though sad...
"all I am are ashes of a burnt out love" ->> that's a great line! Keep it up!

Re: my heart is nothing but a bruise (User Rating: 1 )
by darkkai on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 07:27:11 PM AEST
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wow i feel ya on that poem. wow keep it up
the line " the passing of the earth suffice me
that is until she bores me " i get that way too
it's strange how poetry brings memories
keep 'em coming

Re: my heart is nothing but a bruise (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 01:23:49 AM AEST
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Woooow .... I love this ... I feel these feelings exactly ... awesome write... Jan

Re: my heart is nothing but a bruise (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 04:33:19 PM AEST
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i want to live in a dream where
everything that could never be
somehow is...

well said, don't we all? theres raw emotion on the surface of this poem, eloquently expressed.
great write, Kate x

Re: my heart is nothing but a bruise (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 02:41:10 PM AEST
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Very well writtten why was it brought to you by Coca~Cola? I like the title and I'll be sure to check out more of your stuff.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: my heart is nothing but a bruise (User Rating: 1 )
by Kittenfantastico on Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 03:12:07 PM AEST
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Bows, Very very good.

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