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Array ( [sid] => 148388 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This is the me i hide, the man i feel needs to scream. [time] => 2009-03-09 02:47:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => We barely get the nerve to stare people in the eye let alone stand up for our beliefs.
letting people walk on us while trying to lift our head's let alone smile.
We barely have a voice, well we have billions of voices but our energy's is wasted on that bloody screen.
Or the toys we think we need to have sitting in our driveways.

One point in time we held things to honor and respect a time when people didn't act like children.
A time when bringing the modern age to the people for benefit not profit.
Yes children there was a time people got paid from the banks for using their service.
Responsibility has darkened most minds giving nothing to knowledge or credit.
Were Failing in paying attention, letting them take control without knowing.

We have been suckered with diamonds and the promise of the screen,
believing we have nothing to gain, life sucks no pride left in the bunch.
Someone else is telling you what you want you may be losing your home but you need something more always more
Time is coming that we will have to stand up and take the blame for ourselves stop blaming the past.
We can not change it children and living in the mistakes of the past or the blindness of the present.
Take responsibility for our actions for once we need to grow up one day.
The grave is coming quick if we do not stop partying and see what they have done to things.
They have made a mess, from every aspect it will take many years to fix.
If we do not act soon we will have handed them total control,
please do not let me be forced to live your life
I have love and pride over humanity we are all so beautiful and powerful.
We need to remember that we are more powerful and very beautiful all leaves in a great story tree
Everyone with a unique story you should all try to tell.


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This is the me i hide, the man i feel needs to scream.

Contributed by lostrelic on Monday, 9th March 2009 @ 02:47:30 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



We barely get the nerve to stare people in the eye let alone stand up for our beliefs.
letting people walk on us while trying to lift our head's let alone smile.
We barely have a voice, well we have billions of voices but our energy's is wasted on that bloody screen.
Or the toys we think we need to have sitting in our driveways.

One point in time we held things to honor and respect a time when people didn't act like children.
A time when bringing the modern age to the people for benefit not profit.
Yes children there was a time people got paid from the banks for using their service.
Responsibility has darkened most minds giving nothing to knowledge or credit.
Were Failing in paying attention, letting them take control without knowing.

We have been suckered with diamonds and the promise of the screen,
believing we have nothing to gain, life sucks no pride left in the bunch.
Someone else is telling you what you want you may be losing your home but you need something more always more
Time is coming that we will have to stand up and take the blame for ourselves stop blaming the past.
We can not change it children and living in the mistakes of the past or the blindness of the present.
Take responsibility for our actions for once we need to grow up one day.
The grave is coming quick if we do not stop partying and see what they have done to things.
They have made a mess, from every aspect it will take many years to fix.
If we do not act soon we will have handed them total control,
please do not let me be forced to live your life
I have love and pride over humanity we are all so beautiful and powerful.
We need to remember that we are more powerful and very beautiful all leaves in a great story tree
Everyone with a unique story you should all try to tell.






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Re: This is the me i hide, the man i feel needs to scream. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th March 2009 @ 02:26:28 PM AEST
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very inciteful writing, very passionate.

-phil


Re: This is the me i hide, the man i feel needs to scream. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 9th March 2009 @ 02:42:41 PM AEST
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Wow friend,
this is very powerful.
Awesome.
huggs, blessings,
emy




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