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Array ( [sid] => 148016 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can't Understand [time] => 2009-02-17 10:33:35 [hometext] => Just a vent... I tried to write, but nothing seemed to fit... [bodytext] => I try to understand
And put my thoughts to words
But something within me has changed
Now I am not the same

No rhyme, no word
Seems to be enough
I can’t explain what I feel
To the extent that it is felt

I am still learning
Still trying to find my way
All I want
Is still blurry in my head
I try to understand
But you can’t understand
What is not understandable

So do I cry
Do I sit and wait
What do I do
To fill my day

These thoughts within my head
Have no corresponding words
So my poem is what it is
Nothing less and nothing more
Than a vent to my heart
That is being greatly torn
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 43 [informant] => butterflyperfect [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Can't Understand

Contributed by butterflyperfect on Tuesday, 17th February 2009 @ 10:33:35 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I try to understand
And put my thoughts to words
But something within me has changed
Now I am not the same

No rhyme, no word
Seems to be enough
I can’t explain what I feel
To the extent that it is felt

I am still learning
Still trying to find my way
All I want
Is still blurry in my head
I try to understand
But you can’t understand
What is not understandable

So do I cry
Do I sit and wait
What do I do
To fill my day

These thoughts within my head
Have no corresponding words
So my poem is what it is
Nothing less and nothing more
Than a vent to my heart
That is being greatly torn

Copyright Â© butterflyperfect ... [ 2009-02-17 10:33:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Can't Understand (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th February 2009 @ 12:48:28 PM AEST
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keep at it, the words will come!

-phil

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