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For you my brother
I do not know how many more days it will take
For us to meet and greet each other again

You wanted out and so did I
I tried it once but did survive
But if I had left this life that day
I would never have known your glorious ways

The love you showed me throughout the years
Could only have come from a brother so dear
Your heart was kind and your soul did shine
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My Brother

Contributed by movax on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 07:11:24 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Today my heart was breaking and my soul was aching
For you my brother
I do not know how many more days it will take
For us to meet and greet each other again

You wanted out and so did I
I tried it once but did survive
But if I had left this life that day
I would never have known your glorious ways

The love you showed me throughout the years
Could only have come from a brother so dear
Your heart was kind and your soul did shine
May the Lord hold you in His arms divine tonight

Copyright © movax ... [ 2009-01-24 07:11:24]
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Re: My Brother (User Rating: 1 )
by gmcse8 on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 07:59:30 AM AEST
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I know that people often say that they know how someone feels, but really don't. My little brother died just a month ago on Christmas Eve, so I do know how you are feeling. The writing helps a tiny bit, I did it last month after my little brother's funeral. My deepest sympathys for your loss.

Re: My Brother (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 05:48:05 PM AEST
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There is no easy way to deal with the pain of parting from those we are closest to.
The memory shines brightly through your work here

Steve

Re: My Brother (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 05:54:21 PM AEST
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A lovely and courageous piece that holds up the past and lift's his spirit to God. May you find peace in it.

Be well,
Loende

Re: My Brother (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 08:25:55 PM AEST
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So sorry for your loss.
huggs, blessings,
emy

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