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Array ( [sid] => 147552 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => so serious...poem... [time] => 2009-01-22 03:26:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => work it out

to your

satisfaction

do an action

leave me be

get thee

some of that

fiddle dee dee

do run run

get a gun

i told you

how to have

your fun

make me

your

martyr

beat me

with your

sticks

cover me

with your

lies

make it alright

to spit

in my own hand

so it doesn't feel

like sand

ain't my life grand

creep through

infinity

steal my

identity

make off with everything

ridiculously

make fun of me

as i seriously try to

slap you

silly

fiddle dee dee

do run run

i lost mr gun

study the backside

of it all

laugh your stone

faces off

till your mistakes

are running scared

as hell

through my hall

get a hobby

harassment is

not a hobby

brutality is not

my forte

$$$

your life is sloppy

a malfunction

FBI or CIA

chief of police

it's your

party

i'll eat your garbage

like you

ate mine [comments] => 4 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 43 [informant] => simsalabim [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
so serious...poem...

Contributed by simsalabim on Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 03:26:25 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



work it out

to your

satisfaction

do an action

leave me be

get thee

some of that

fiddle dee dee

do run run

get a gun

i told you

how to have

your fun

make me

your

martyr

beat me

with your

sticks

cover me

with your

lies

make it alright

to spit

in my own hand

so it doesn't feel

like sand

ain't my life grand

creep through

infinity

steal my

identity

make off with everything

ridiculously

make fun of me

as i seriously try to

slap you

silly

fiddle dee dee

do run run

i lost mr gun

study the backside

of it all

laugh your stone

faces off

till your mistakes

are running scared

as hell

through my hall

get a hobby

harassment is

not a hobby

brutality is not

my forte

$$$

your life is sloppy

a malfunction

FBI or CIA

chief of police

it's your

party

i'll eat your garbage

like you

ate mine




Copyright © simsalabim ... [ 2009-01-22 03:26:25]
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Re: so serious...poem... (User Rating: 1 )
by fanniesson on Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 09:38:35 AM AEST
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The lay out of the piece stanza wise was just perfect
making this an interesting and excellent
read for me


Re: so serious...poem... (User Rating: 1 )
by ItsMeNow on Wednesday, 11th February 2009 @ 11:08:09 AM AEST
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Wow this is a crazy poem. I don't fully understand it nonetheless I like it.


Re: so serious...poem... (User Rating: 1 )
by ShaonKra on Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 04:10:39 AM AEST
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What can I say, it's worthy of a black aspirin


Re: so serious...poem... (User Rating: 1 )
by simsalabim on Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 11:52:10 PM AEST
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thank you so much and you're worthy of a pink cigarette..




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