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Array ( [sid] => 147372 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the very moment of emotion [time] => 2009-01-11 03:41:26 [hometext] => from my heart [bodytext] => Extremely insecure,

Massive wall or block in my head

Commitment scares the ***** out of me

I have been hurt in so many ways

In my head, I find it hard to control it

I feel like I’m loosing myself of who I am?

Does that make sense?

I’m falling apart and everything has crashed right in front of my face

I could of prevented it all in the first place

Not necessary guilt i feel

Pain

Sorrow

Anger

Contentment

There all scrambled in my head

Years of built up "what ever it is inside of me"

Now and effecting me on a massive level mentally

Just hit me in a critical part in my life

a chapter

A page in a book

One day and finally one moment

“My intentions are never to say hello followed with a good bye”

I’m something else but no one really sees that

Think of me as not a role model,

But a friend companion someone to cope to despite all odds

Journey in life because we can only practice what we preach as well

Cope depending on how you look at it

but then again… what’s life ?

Without risks?

Temptations

Your inner drive for something

You want something so badly,

Farther you reach

The rather it gets away from you

Very vulnerable right at this moment i feel

Vulnerable to me and what the future lies before me

Intrigued on how your mind thinks and i feel a drive or need for more of that

Uncontrolled sensation

But don’t let me fool you

I second guess how I feel

All the time

Could be for a number of reasons

Excitement

Sexual

Mental

momental

It feels so odd to me

At this point in my life

Possibly,

its deeper than that

I just don’t know what that may be yet

What lies in the future my friend

I just close my eyes

Not think of nothing

And just listen for once

Can’t have a reason for everything in life

One day i will find those answers in my life

Sum up to one moment in my life

Can look at it and be proud of it for me

MY FATHER

Then I will ask myself "in the end was it all worth it"

I feel threatened

Vulnerable to me

Think deeper than that

Sometimes I just can help how i feel

I feel uncontrolled

Driven to something and blinding out everything that really matters

Couldn’t stop even if I wanted to

Blinding out in everything within me

My past and forget about everything that really matters

For that one second

I can feel happy even if it hurts me in the end

Everything that comes in my way

But can you look in my eyes and see what i see?

“You should never forget yourself... who else are you sure to have forever”

See past the illusion

“Chance in life, people are taken from you and not always by a choice of there own”

Only to leave with a goodbye

This isn’t about my past

I’m letting go of that

Starting over clean slate

Sometimes its the best way

I’m a very confined person

Don’t say much and keep my thought to myself

Some people just don’t need to know

“There comes a point in your life when you realize
who matters,
who never did,
who won't anymore..
and who always will.
So, don't worry about people from your past,
there's a reason why they didn't make it to your future.”

'Be kinder than necessary because everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle.' [comments] => 3 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 48 [informant] => derickkk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
the very moment of emotion

Contributed by derickkk on Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 03:41:26 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Extremely insecure,

Massive wall or block in my head

Commitment scares the ***** out of me

I have been hurt in so many ways

In my head, I find it hard to control it

I feel like I’m loosing myself of who I am?

Does that make sense?

I’m falling apart and everything has crashed right in front of my face

I could of prevented it all in the first place

Not necessary guilt i feel

Pain

Sorrow

Anger

Contentment

There all scrambled in my head

Years of built up "what ever it is inside of me"

Now and effecting me on a massive level mentally

Just hit me in a critical part in my life

a chapter

A page in a book

One day and finally one moment

“My intentions are never to say hello followed with a good bye”

I’m something else but no one really sees that

Think of me as not a role model,

But a friend companion someone to cope to despite all odds

Journey in life because we can only practice what we preach as well

Cope depending on how you look at it

but then again… what’s life ?

Without risks?

Temptations

Your inner drive for something

You want something so badly,

Farther you reach

The rather it gets away from you

Very vulnerable right at this moment i feel

Vulnerable to me and what the future lies before me

Intrigued on how your mind thinks and i feel a drive or need for more of that

Uncontrolled sensation

But don’t let me fool you

I second guess how I feel

All the time

Could be for a number of reasons

Excitement

Sexual

Mental

momental

It feels so odd to me

At this point in my life

Possibly,

its deeper than that

I just don’t know what that may be yet

What lies in the future my friend

I just close my eyes

Not think of nothing

And just listen for once

Can’t have a reason for everything in life

One day i will find those answers in my life

Sum up to one moment in my life

Can look at it and be proud of it for me

MY FATHER

Then I will ask myself "in the end was it all worth it"

I feel threatened

Vulnerable to me

Think deeper than that

Sometimes I just can help how i feel

I feel uncontrolled

Driven to something and blinding out everything that really matters

Couldn’t stop even if I wanted to

Blinding out in everything within me

My past and forget about everything that really matters

For that one second

I can feel happy even if it hurts me in the end

Everything that comes in my way

But can you look in my eyes and see what i see?

“You should never forget yourself... who else are you sure to have forever”

See past the illusion

“Chance in life, people are taken from you and not always by a choice of there own”

Only to leave with a goodbye

This isn’t about my past

I’m letting go of that

Starting over clean slate

Sometimes its the best way

I’m a very confined person

Don’t say much and keep my thought to myself

Some people just don’t need to know

“There comes a point in your life when you realize
who matters,
who never did,
who won't anymore..
and who always will.
So, don't worry about people from your past,
there's a reason why they didn't make it to your future.”

'Be kinder than necessary because everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle.'




Copyright © derickkk ... [ 2009-01-11 03:41:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: the very moment of emotion (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 10:37:48 AM AEST
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my friend, sometimes the difficulty of being human is an overwhelming gift, slow & painful or piercing & quickening like an electrical shock. either way, in that moment, you recognize the very fragile humanness that is our being. let us not forget every genuine encounter that is beautiful, tender, lovely & fine. these are our gifts as well. your verse flows onto the page with true soul-seaching & I applaude your in depth sharing. I love the final line. a passionate bit of insight & advice. in life, when you hold such truths as this, you'll surely be blessed.


Re: the very moment of emotion (User Rating: 1 )
by Loriann on Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 04:33:09 PM AEST
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This poem is so true. So many people hurt like everone else, but in many different ways. You have captured it here. Excellent write.


Re: the very moment of emotion (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 05:05:05 PM AEST
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Things are never easy in life, that is cold hard truth. Writing helps though, as a form of escape... even if temporary. This write is so deep with so much truth and emotion and I think that is what makes it so wonderful.

Love Always,
~Butterfly




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