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and your to blame
I could have just said stop
But why I didn't I know not

I feel bad now
And it makes me mad now
I just want to die
oh sweet sweet suicide

In my mind it was so wrong
but my body same a different song
As I may try and try
I can never find a way to justify

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What I've done

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 04:02:18 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

everything will never be the same
and your to blame
I could have just said stop
But why I didn't I know not

I feel bad now
And it makes me mad now
I just want to die
oh sweet sweet suicide

In my mind it was so wrong
but my body same a different song
As I may try and try
I can never find a way to justify

what I've done

Copyright © Voice of the Silent ... [ 2008-12-31 16:02:18]
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Re: What I've done (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 06:02:42 PM AEST
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i am still trying to understand what you did
but that i guess is the point of the write
its short but it takes on some sort of form

Re: What I've done (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 07:32:37 PM AEST
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good write.

-phil

Re: What I've done (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 10:12:18 PM AEST
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I hope this is just awesome poetry. Whatever you may have done (if this is based on you) Can't have been that bad. If you want to talk I am here.

Great write

Re: What I've done (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 10:54:14 PM AEST
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Well sweetie take it easy on yourself. We all mess up, that's why there's mercy and grace.
It's not hard to figure out what your talking about.
We're only human.
Luv, huggs, forgiveness, happy New year,
emy

Re: What I've done (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 12:51:27 AM AEST
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No one is perfect. Do not be afraid, and don't take yourself to seriously. We all end up dead in the end anyway =P.

Re: What I've done (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 1st January 2009 @ 01:30:25 PM AEST
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Hi Kelly...we all step-off at some point I think, but be kind to yourself. Vincent

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