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Array ( [sid] => 147066 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the Only Way I Can Say What I Feel (Letting Go) [time] => 2008-12-27 14:32:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Precise lines in untidy writing
Dying to say, all these words
Hoping you read this right

Even though you're gone
The songs still hold the memory
So longingly

You're better at this then I'll ever be
I was better with you,
You're gone.

I'll always be the hopeless girl
Unfailingly
Hoping for the impossible.

I'll hold onto fragments
Until they shatter to dust
So quick, you left me reeling

I don't trust myself -
How can I trust anyone else,
With me? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 71 [informant] => anomalei [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => secrets )

the Only Way I Can Say What I Feel (Letting Go)

Contributed by anomalei on Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 02:32:07 PM in AEST
Topic: secrets

Precise lines in untidy writing
Dying to say, all these words
Hoping you read this right

Even though you're gone
The songs still hold the memory
So longingly

You're better at this then I'll ever be
I was better with you,
You're gone.

I'll always be the hopeless girl
Unfailingly
Hoping for the impossible.

I'll hold onto fragments
Until they shatter to dust
So quick, you left me reeling

I don't trust myself -
How can I trust anyone else,
With me?

Copyright © anomalei ... [ 2008-12-27 14:32:07]
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Re: the Only Way I Can Say What I Feel (Letting Go) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 06:43:12 PM AEST
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you kept it simple, a good idea for a first write i would say. it was a nice read, good work.

-phil

Re: the Only Way I Can Say What I Feel (Letting Go) (User Rating: 1 )
by djs on Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 12:10:38 PM AEST
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these two lines are so powerful...

"...I'll hold onto fragments
Until they shatter to dust..."

that is exactly what we all do when we lose something so important. great work here. really great work.

Re: the Only Way I Can Say What I Feel (Letting Go) (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 08:30:27 PM AEST
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Emotional flow,
I know you wanted to write a whole lot more then you did...
well done.

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