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Array ( [sid] => 14705 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Echo [time] => 2003-03-22 00:45:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => These words echo in my head
Of a love once alive
Now left for dead

" I love you for what you've done for me "
I said, too afraid to be totally free

" I'm in too deep.. I love you "
She said, could this be true?

" I have daydreamed of what life would be like with you "
We said, sharing and caring as we grew

" I'm very pleased "
She said, adding to my ease

" What are you doing here? "
She said, igniting my worst fear

" I need to know you'll be there for me "
I asked, needing to feel, feeling to need

" You made me happy when I thought I'd not be happy again. I am setting you free "
She said, offering thanks, but cutting me off at the knee

" I am alone now."
I reflected, holding my brow

" Things don't have to change "
She said, her voice sounding strange

" I have to change "
I replied, my world is rearranged

" It's not up for debate, I don't feel like you do "
She added, so defiant, it must be true

" Why does it hurt so much? "
I asked, no answer expected for such

"Is compassion also not a part of passion"
I thought quietly, knowing of no answer
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ThirtyDays [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Echo

Contributed by ThirtyDays on Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



These words echo in my head
Of a love once alive
Now left for dead

" I love you for what you've done for me "
I said, too afraid to be totally free

" I'm in too deep.. I love you "
She said, could this be true?

" I have daydreamed of what life would be like with you "
We said, sharing and caring as we grew

" I'm very pleased "
She said, adding to my ease

" What are you doing here? "
She said, igniting my worst fear

" I need to know you'll be there for me "
I asked, needing to feel, feeling to need

" You made me happy when I thought I'd not be happy again. I am setting you free "
She said, offering thanks, but cutting me off at the knee

" I am alone now."
I reflected, holding my brow

" Things don't have to change "
She said, her voice sounding strange

" I have to change "
I replied, my world is rearranged

" It's not up for debate, I don't feel like you do "
She added, so defiant, it must be true

" Why does it hurt so much? "
I asked, no answer expected for such

"Is compassion also not a part of passion"
I thought quietly, knowing of no answer




Copyright © ThirtyDays ... [ 2003-03-22 00:45:00]
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Re: Echo (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 12:54:09 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this. It's a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing!
juliette


Re: Echo (User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 11:50:14 AM AEST
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Well you never know when you click on
A Mystery, well for me it turned out
to be a Wonderful poem really
like the way this has been written
great write

Take care
Fuzzy




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