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Array ( [sid] => 146758 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => - The First Time - [time] => 2008-12-10 20:42:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The first time I saw you
then I realized
your long black hair
and them beautiful eyes

As I notice your style
and the expressions on your face
It captured my vision
while sitting in your place

Almost everyday I see you
but until then
I worked all day long
to come visit you again

I dont know what it is
that you possess inside
maybe its your smile
or your arms open so wide

What amazes me the most
is when I walk in
watching you look my way
as I wave hello again

So may you know
please hear this true
your so wonderful
in everything you do

And just for that
heres what Ill do
pray my hands together
and continue on with you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 30 [informant] => 143 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )

- The First Time -

Contributed by 143 on Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 08:42:02 PM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

The first time I saw you
then I realized
your long black hair
and them beautiful eyes

As I notice your style
and the expressions on your face
It captured my vision
while sitting in your place

Almost everyday I see you
but until then
I worked all day long
to come visit you again

I dont know what it is
that you possess inside
maybe its your smile
or your arms open so wide

What amazes me the most
is when I walk in
watching you look my way
as I wave hello again

So may you know
please hear this true
your so wonderful
in everything you do

And just for that
heres what Ill do
pray my hands together
and continue on with you

Copyright © 143 ... [ 2008-12-10 20:42:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: - The First Time - (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Wednesday, 10th December 2008 @ 09:05:01 PM AEST
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I like the first stanza, them is actually a better word than those as I see it in this instance =). Otherwise, it's a nice poem =P.

Re: - The First Time - (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th December 2008 @ 08:23:55 AM AEST
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a nice, pleasant love poem. one filled with positivity and subtle emotion. it made me smile, so thanks for that.

-phil

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