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[sid] => 146699
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Wondering...
[time] => 2008-12-07 15:55:59
[hometext] => My first poem... I'd appericiate your opinion!
[bodytext] => What if all this..is just a dream and i wake up, without telling you how i feel?! What if my mind created you as a perfection that doesn't exist, What if this feeling is killing me slowly, but I'm taking the risk?! What if this is just a game where no one wins, what if emptiness and tears is all it brings?! What happens when someday, nothing will be the same, will you remember the first song we danced? Will you still remember my name? Well... I guess this is not a dream, and I'm already awake, I'm not brave enough, to tell you how I feel, it's something I cant take! You're not my imagination, you do exist... I can tell by the look in your eyes that I cant resist... An if this feeling is about to kill me, I don't mind! Cause' at least I'd know I was alive, at least I'd know I wasn't blind! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 48 [informant] => meandyou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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